May 22, 2022
I wanna speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️
By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.
B: Excuse me. How can I get to Kokubunji station?
A: Oh, yeah. Gimme a minute, ok?(※I'm using an app to look up train lines.)
B: That app is good. What's its name?
A: Well, "Japan travel".
I guess this is so useful for foreigners because you can look up Japanese train lines in English. Anyway, let's get back to the main topic.
(※I'm using that app to explain)
Can you understand the explanation when you look at this screen? If you can, I think if you downloaded it that would solve the problem?
B: Oh, yeah. I understand. I'll download it now. So could you show me how to use it?
A: Of course.
B: Wait a minute.
A: Yes.
B: That’s it.
A: Ok. But there's almost nothing how to use it, haha. It's super easy. Just enter the name of the current station here and the station you want to go to here. But, bus stops are also listed in the search results, so please make sure that you have the correct station name.
Would you like to try one?
B: Yes.
Can I type in English?
A: Yes.
So this white area is the name of the station you're getting in and out of, and this gray area is the name of the line and the station you're passing through.
B: Oh, thank you. That's really helpful!
A: You're welcome! So does it seem alright?
B: Yes!
A: Ok. Then have a good trip!!
B: Thank you! Take care!
A: You too.
HDo you know how I can I get to Kokubunji station?
B: That app ilooks good/handy.
What's its name called?
A: (Well,) It's called "Japan travel".
I guess this is soit's useful for foreigners because you can look up Japanese train lines in English.
Can you understand the explanation when you look at this screeninfo on this page?
If you can, I think if you downloaded it that would solve the problem?the app it might help.
But there's almost nothing on how to use it, haha.
It doesn't have many instructions on how to use it.
Bute careful though, bus stops are also listed in the search results, so please make sure that you have typed in the correct station name.
Don't start a sentence with But.
Would you like to try onegive it a try?
So this white area is the name of the station you're getting leaving from (or arriving and out oft?), and this gray area is the name of the line and the stations you're passing through.
So does it seem alright?¶
Is there anything else I can help you with?
It works but a native wouldn't say that.
Feedback
Well done !
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I wanna speak like a native!!
Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️
By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.
B: Excuse me.
How cando I get to Kokubunji sStation?
Your sentence was fine, but this sounds more natural.
A: Oh, yeah.
I am trying to imagine how I would naturally answer this question, and I think I'd just say 'Oh' or 'Oh, sure...'
Gimme a minute, ok?One sec.
(※I'm using an app to look up train lines. )
B: That app iseems good.
Since B has never used the app, they wouldn't say 'the app is good' because they haven't used it yet (no experience). In this case, 'seems' works better.
What's its name called?
A: Well, "Japan travel".
I guess this is soit would be useful for foreigners because you can look up Japanese train lines in English.
Anyway, let's get back to the main topic...
Once again, your sentence is perfect. I just think if I was talking to someone in real life, I wouldn't say 'let's get back to the main topic.' Saying 'Anyway...' implies that you are moving on with the topic.
(※I'm using thate app to explain)
Can you understand the explanation when you lookDoes this make sense? (While pointing at thise screen?)
Another way to say this that is closer to what you originally wrote would be 'Are you able to understand the directions from the app?'
If so, you can, I think if you downloaded it that would solve the problemould download the app yourself?
B: Oh, yeah.
I understand.
I'll download it right now.
You sentence is fine, this just sounds more natural.
So cCould you show me how to use it?
B: Wait a minute.Ok, sorry, one second.
'One sec' or 'one second' is more natural than asking someone to wait a minute (not used very frequently).
A: YesOk.
B: That’s itOk, it's done.
I assume B is telling A that the app is finished downloading
But tThere's almost nothing how to use it, haha.basically no instructions on how to use it, but it's super easy.
It's super easy.
Just enter the name of the current station here and the station you want to go to here.
Instead of 'enter' you could say 'just type the name' or 'just put the name'.
But, bus stops are also listed in the search results, so please make sure that you have the correct station name.
WouldDo you likewant to try one?
B: Yes.
Can I type in English?
A: Yes.
So this white area is the name of the station you're getting in and out of, and this gray area is the name of the line and the station you're passing through.
B: Ohk, thank you.
That's really helpful!
If you want to be extra natural sounding, you could say 'that's super helpful.' However, because this is the end of the interaction, you might want to say 'You've been extremely helpful.'
So does it seem alrightare you good to go?
B: Yes!
A: Ok. Then have a good trip!!
B: Thank you!
Take care!
A: You too.
Feedback
Your English is really good! Most of my corrections are optional to sound more natural.
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How can I get to Kokubunji station? How Your sentence was fine, but this sounds more natural.
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A: Oh, yeah. A: Oh I am trying to imagine how I would naturally answer this question, and I think I'd just say 'Oh' or 'Oh, sure...' |
Gimme a minute, ok?
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B: That app is good. B: That app Since B has never used the app, they wouldn't say 'the app is good' because they haven't used it yet (no experience). In this case, 'seems' works better. B: That app |
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A: Well, "Japan travel". A: A: (Well,) It's called "Japan travel". |
I guess this is so useful for foreigners because you can look up Japanese train lines in English. I guess I guess |
Anyway, let's get back to the main topic. Anyway Once again, your sentence is perfect. I just think if I was talking to someone in real life, I wouldn't say 'let's get back to the main topic.' Saying 'Anyway...' implies that you are moving on with the topic. |
(※I'm using that app to explain) (※I'm using th |
Can you understand the explanation when you look at this screen?
Another way to say this that is closer to what you originally wrote would be 'Are you able to understand the directions from the app?' Can you understand the |
If you can, I think if you downloaded it that would solve the problem? If so, you c If you can, I think if you downloaded |
B: Oh, yeah. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I understand. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I'll download it now. I'll download it right now. You sentence is fine, this just sounds more natural. |
So could you show me how to use it?
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A: Of course. |
B: Wait a minute. B: 'One sec' or 'one second' is more natural than asking someone to wait a minute (not used very frequently). |
A: Yes. A: |
B: That’s it. B: I assume B is telling A that the app is finished downloading |
A: Ok. |
But there's almost nothing how to use it, haha.
But there's almost nothing on how to use it, haha. It doesn't have many instructions on how to use it. |
It's super easy.
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Just enter the name of the current station here and the station you want to go to here. Just enter the name of the current station here and the station you want to go to here. Instead of 'enter' you could say 'just type the name' or 'just put the name'. |
But, bus stops are also listed in the search results, so please make sure that you have the correct station name. But, bus stops are also listed in the search results, so B Don't start a sentence with But. |
Would you like to try one?
Would you like to |
B: Yes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Can I type in English? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
A: Yes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
So this white area is the name of the station you're getting in and out of, and this gray area is the name of the line and the station you're passing through. This sentence has been marked as perfect! So this white area is the name of the station you're |
B: Oh, thank you. B: O |
That's really helpful! That's really helpful! If you want to be extra natural sounding, you could say 'that's super helpful.' However, because this is the end of the interaction, you might want to say 'You've been extremely helpful.' |
A: You're welcome! |
So does it seem alright? So So does it seem alright?¶ It works but a native wouldn't say that. |
B: Yes! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
A: Ok. Then have a good trip!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
B: Thank you! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Take care! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
A: You too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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