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sho

May 22, 2022

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I wanna speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.



B: Excuse me. May I ask you something?
A: Umm, my English isn't very good, but I'll try my best.
B: Thank you. Could you tell me how to get to Seki dragstore?
A: Yes. Well... Just a minute. So let me explain with this map, first of all, we are here now, and, let's see, where is the Seki dragstore, oh, here it is, so you go from here to the end here, and turn right, and turn right again here, and turn left at the corner here, and left here too, and go to the bridge here, and turn right there, and turn left at the convenience store here, and walk a little bit, and then you'll see Seki dragstore.
In a nutshell, right, right, left, left, right, left.
B: Oh Good.
Right, right, left, left, right, left.
A: That is correct.
B: Thank you so much!
I really appreciate that!
A: You're welcome!
Bon voyage!
B: Thanks!
Take care!
A: You too!

Corrections

Could you please help me by correcting anything that' sounds wrong or unnatural in my sentences?

May I ask you something?

Can you help me with something?

Could you tell me how to get to Seki draugstore?

Drugstore? Drag is when men dress up as women!

WellOk... Just (give me) a minute.

So let me explain with this map, f. First of all, we are here now, and, let's see, where is the Seki draugstore, o? Oh, here it is, so you go from here to the end here, and turn right, and turn right again here, and turn left at/around the corner here, and then left here too, and go to the bridge here, and turn right there, and turn left at the convenience store here, and walk a little bit, and then you'll see the Seki draugstore.

B: Oh GSounds good.

Bon voyage!

French for have a good journey, which works in this case as it seems like the drugstore is quite far away!

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sho

May 23, 2022

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May I ask you something?

Which is sounds more natural?

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sho

May 23, 2022

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Bon voyage!

Is "Good luck!" more appropriate in that case, since the drugstore is close by?

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peteyb

May 24, 2022

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Good luck would imply a certain chance that they will fail in finding the store. Yet it works.

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peteyb

May 24, 2022

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Which is sounds more natural?

Probably can you help me!

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sho

May 24, 2022

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Thank you very much!!!
you've been so helpful!🙇‍♂️

Giving directions 15

I wanna speak like a native!!

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏

Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.

I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.

B: Excuse me.

MayCan I ask you something?

'May' sounds very polite, and English speakers rarely talk that formally.

A: Umm, my English isn't very good, but I'll try my best.

B: Thank you.

Could you tell me how to get to Seki draDrugstore?

I think you mean 'Drugstore'

A: Yes.

SoHere, let me explain with this map, f... First of all, we are here now, and, let's see, where is the Seki draDrugstore, oh, here it is, so you go from here to the end, here, and turn right, and turn right again here, and turn left at the corner here, and left here too, and go to the bridge here, and turn right there, and turn left at the convenience store here, and walk a little bit, and then you'll see Seki draDrugstore.

In a nutshell, right, right, left, left, right, left.

B: Oh Good.

ROk, so right, right, left, left, right, left.?

A: That is correct.Yes, exactly.

I really appreciate that!

Bon voyage!

I'm not sure most English speakers would say this, but I like it lol. It's not commonly said, and I imagine that eccentric people would maybe say it.

B: Thanks!

Take care!

A: You too!

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sho

May 23, 2022

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Thank you so much!!!
You've been extremely helpful!🙇‍♂️

B: Thanks!


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Take care!


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A: You too!


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I wanna speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


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Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


Could you please help me by correcting anything that' sounds wrong or unnatural in my sentences?

You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.


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I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️


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By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.


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B: Excuse me.


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May I ask you something?


MayCan I ask you something?

'May' sounds very polite, and English speakers rarely talk that formally.

May I ask you something?

Can you help me with something?

A: Umm, my English isn't very good, but I'll try my best.


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B: Thank you.


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Could you tell me how to get to Seki dragstore?


Could you tell me how to get to Seki draDrugstore?

I think you mean 'Drugstore'

Could you tell me how to get to Seki draugstore?

Drugstore? Drag is when men dress up as women!

A: Yes.


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Well... Just a minute.


WellOk... Just (give me) a minute.

So let me explain with this map, first of all, we are here now, and, let's see, where is the Seki dragstore, oh, here it is, so you go from here to the end here, and turn right, and turn right again here, and turn left at the corner here, and left here too, and go to the bridge here, and turn right there, and turn left at the convenience store here, and walk a little bit, and then you'll see Seki dragstore.


SoHere, let me explain with this map, f... First of all, we are here now, and, let's see, where is the Seki draDrugstore, oh, here it is, so you go from here to the end, here, and turn right, and turn right again here, and turn left at the corner here, and left here too, and go to the bridge here, and turn right there, and turn left at the convenience store here, and walk a little bit, and then you'll see Seki draDrugstore.

So let me explain with this map, f. First of all, we are here now, and, let's see, where is the Seki draugstore, o? Oh, here it is, so you go from here to the end here, and turn right, and turn right again here, and turn left at/around the corner here, and then left here too, and go to the bridge here, and turn right there, and turn left at the convenience store here, and walk a little bit, and then you'll see the Seki draugstore.

In a nutshell, right, right, left, left, right, left.


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B: Oh Good.


B: Oh Good.

B: Oh GSounds good.

Right, right, left, left, right, left.


ROk, so right, right, left, left, right, left.?

A: That is correct.


A: That is correct.Yes, exactly.

B: Thank you so much!


I really appreciate that!


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A: You're welcome!


Bon voyage!


Bon voyage!

I'm not sure most English speakers would say this, but I like it lol. It's not commonly said, and I imagine that eccentric people would maybe say it.

Bon voyage!

French for have a good journey, which works in this case as it seems like the drugstore is quite far away!

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