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April 7, 2023

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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you find in a textbook, please correct me so that I can sound like a native🙇‍♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

B: Excuse me.
A: Hi.
B: I'm looking for a store called Metro, do you know where it is?
A: Metro?
B: Yes.
A: Sorry, I'm not quite sure. Are you in a hurry?
B: No, not really.
A: If you'd like I can find it on my phone and take you there.
B: Oh, really?
A: Yep.
B: Thank you!
A: You're welcome. What kind of store is it?
B: It’s a wholesale market. It sells groceries like Costco.
A: Oh okay. Is it spelled M-E-T-O-R-O?
B: No. It’s M-E-T-R-O.
A: Oh, M-E-T-R-O. Ok. It's in this city, right?
B: Ah~, probably.
A: Okay.
B: I'll check too.
A: Is this it?
B: Oh, yeah. Yes, that's it!!
A: Hang on a sec, I'll search the route. Oh, it says it’s about a 5-minute walk from here.
B:Oh really.
A: Alright. This way then. Let's go.
B: Yes.
A: Anyways, did you check to see if the store is open today?
B: Ah~, no.
A: Okay. Let me check. Oh, safe.
B: Is it open?
A: Yes. It says they are open from 9 a.m. to 10 p.m. on weekdays.
B: Oh, good. That’s a relief.
A: Yeah, good for you. Anyway, why would you go to a wholesale market when you came all the way here to Japan?

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Give ding Directions 5

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook, p. Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇‍♂️

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

B: Excuse me.

A: Hi.

B: I'm looking for a store called Metro, d. Do you know where it is?

A: Metro?

B: Yes.

A: Sorry, I'm not quite sure where that is.

Are you in a hurry?

B: No, not really.

A: If you'd like, I can find it on my phone and take you there.

B: Oh, really?

A: Yep.

B: Thank you!

A: You're welcome.

What kind of store is it?

B: It’s a wholesale market.

It sells groceries like Costco.

A: Oh, okay.

Is it spelled M-E-T-O-R-O?

B: No.

It’s M-E-T-R-O.

A: Oh, M-E-T-R-O.

Okay.

It's in this city, right?

B: Ah~h, probably.

A: Okay.

B: I'll check, too.

A: Is this it?

B: Oh, yeah.

Yes, that's it!!

A: Hang on a sec, I'll searchlet me look at the route.

Oh, it says it’s about a 5-minute walk from here.

B: Oh, really.

A: Alright.

This way then.

Let's go.

B: YesOkay.

A: AnywaysOh, did you check to see if the store is open today?

B: Ah~h, no.

A: Okay.

Let me check.

Oh, safewe're good.

B: Is it open?

A: Yes.

It says they are open from 9 a.m. to 10 p.m. on weekdays.

B: Oh, good.

That’s a relief.

A: Yeah, good for you.

Anyway, why would you go to a wholesale market when you came all the way over here to visit Japan?

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sho

April 10, 2023

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ありがとうございます!!🙇‍♂️

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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you find in a textbook, please correct me so that I can sound like a native🙇‍♂️


I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook, p. Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇‍♂️

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!


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B: Excuse me.


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A: Hi.


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B: I'm looking for a store called Metro, do you know where it is?


B: I'm looking for a store called Metro, d. Do you know where it is?

A: Metro?


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A: Sorry, I'm not quite sure.


A: Sorry, I'm not quite sure where that is.

Are you in a hurry?


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B: No, not really.


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A: If you'd like I can find it on my phone and take you there.


A: If you'd like, I can find it on my phone and take you there.

B: Oh, really?


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A: Yep.


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B: Thank you!


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A: You're welcome.


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What kind of store is it?


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B: It’s a wholesale market.


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It sells groceries like Costco.


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A: Oh okay.


A: Oh, okay.

Is it spelled M-E-T-O-R-O?


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B: No.


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It’s M-E-T-R-O.


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A: Oh, M-E-T-R-O.


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Ok.


Okay.

It's in this city, right?


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B: Ah~, probably.


B: Ah~h, probably.

A: Okay.


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B: I'll check too.


B: I'll check, too.

A: Is this it?


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B: Oh, yeah.


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Yes, that's it!!


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A: Hang on a sec, I'll search the route.


A: Hang on a sec, I'll searchlet me look at the route.

Oh, it says it’s about a 5-minute walk from here.


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B:Oh really.


B: Oh, really.

A: Alright.


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This way then.


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Let's go.


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B: Yes.


B: YesOkay.

A: Anyways, did you check to see if the store is open today?


A: AnywaysOh, did you check to see if the store is open today?

B: Ah~, no.


B: Ah~h, no.

A: Okay.


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Let me check.


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Oh, safe.


Oh, safewe're good.

B: Is it open?


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A: Yes.


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It says they are open from 9 a.m. to 10 p.m. on weekdays.


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B: Oh, good.


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That’s a relief.


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A: Yeah, good for you.


A: Yeah, good for you.

Anyway, why would you go to a wholesale market when you came all the way here to Japan?


Anyway, why would you go to a wholesale market when you came all the way over here to visit Japan?

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