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May 18, 2022

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Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.


B: Excuse me.
A: Hi, how may I help you?
B: I'm looking for a store called Metro, do you know where it is?
A: Metro?
B: Yes.
A: Sorry, I'm not quite sure. Are you in a rush?
B: No, not really.
A: I have some time so I can help you find it on my phone and take you there, if you want?
B: Oh, really?
A: Of course!
B: Thank you!
A: Anyways, what kind of store is it?
B: It’s a wholesale market. It sells groceries like Costco.
A: Ok. Is it spelled like M-E-T-O-R-O?
B: No. It’s M-E-T-R-O.
A: Oh, M-E-T-R-O. Ok. It's in this city, right?
B: Ah~, probably.
A: Okay, haha.
B: Wait a sec, I'll check again too.
A: Is this it?
B: Oh, yeah. Yes, that's it!!
A: Hang on a sec, I'll search the route. Oh, it said it’s about a 5-minute walk from here. Ok, right. This way then. Let's go.
B: Yes, let's go.
A: Anyways, did you check to see if the store is open today?
B: Ah~, No, haha.
A: Haha. Okay. Let me check.
Oh, saaaafe!
B: Is it open?
A: Yes. It says they are open from 9am to 10pm on weekdays.
B: Oh, good. That’s a relief.
A: Yeah, good for you.
Anyways, why would you go to a wholesale market when you came all the way here to Japan?

Corrections

Are you in a rushhurry?

B: Ah~, probably.?

B: Wait a sec, I'll check again too.

Ok, Alright.

B: Ah~, Nno, haha.

It says they are open from 9am a.m. to 10pm p.m. on weekdays.

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sho

May 19, 2022

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Thank you for your help!!😭

Give directions 5


Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!


I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️


Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.


I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️


By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.


B: Excuse me.


A: Hi, how may I help you?


B: I'm looking for a store called Metro, do you know where it is?


A: Metro?


B: Yes.


A: Sorry, I'm not quite sure.


Are you in a rush?


Are you in a rushhurry?

B: No, not really.


A: I have some time so I can help you find it on my phone and take you there, if you want?


B: Oh, really?


A: Of course!


B: Thank you!


A: Anyways, what kind of store is it?


B: It’s a wholesale market.


It sells groceries like Costco.


A: Ok. Is it spelled like M-E-T-O-R-O?


B: No.


It’s M-E-T-R-O.


A: Oh, M-E-T-R-O.


Ok.


It's in this city, right?


B: Ah~, probably.


B: Ah~, probably.?

A: Okay.


haha


B: Wait a sec, I'll check again too.


B: Wait a sec, I'll check again too.

A: Is this it?


B: Oh, yeah.


Yes, that's it!!


A: Hang on a sec, I'll search the route.


Oh, it said it’s about a 5-minute walk from here.


Ok, right.


Ok, Alright.

This way then.


Let's go.


B: Yes, let's go.


A: Anyways, did you check to see if the store is open today?


B: Ah~, No.


haha


A: Haha.


Okay.


Let me check.


Oh, saaaafe!


B: Is it open?


A: Yes.


It says they are open from 9am to 10pm on weekdays.


It says they are open from 9am a.m. to 10pm p.m. on weekdays.

B: Oh, good.


That’s a relief.


A: Yeah, good for you.


Anyways, why would you go to a wholesale market when you came all the way here to Japan?


A: Okay, haha


B: Ah~, No, haha


A: Okay, haha.


B: Ah~, No, haha.


B: Ah~, Nno, haha.

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