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sho

May 21, 2022

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I wanna speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.



B: Excuse me. Do you speak English?
A: Uh-, sorry. I’m bad at English. But is there anything I can do for you?
B: Do you know where I can find Toho cinemas?
A: Is there in this city?
B: Yes. Probably.
A: Uh-, sorry. I don't know. I'm not too busy, so I'll check the route now and I can show you, if you want.
B: Oh, really?
A: Of course!
B: Oh, thank you. I’ll take you up on that.
A: Your welcome. Then, give me a mini, let me check.
B: Thanks!
A: Is this the right place?
B: Well... yes! This is it!
A: Okay, then. Let's go.

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Giveing directions 13

I wanna speak like a native!!

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?

You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏

Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.

I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.

B: Excuse me.

Do you speak English?

A: Uh-,... sorry.

This is quite a small thing, but I think that the ellipsis "..." is good here.

I’m bad at English.

But iIs there anything I can do for you?

I think it would be better to say something like "Can I help you with something?".

B: Do you know where I can find Toho cCinemas?

Is "Toho Cinemas" the full name of the place? If so, both words must be capitalized.

A: Is there one in this city?

B: Yes, probably.

Probably.

A: Uh-,... sorry.

I don't know.

I'm not too busy, so I'll check the route now and I can show you, if you want.

You wouldn't tell them that you're checking the route if you aren't even sure yet that the place exists in the city!

B: Oh, really?

A: Of course!

B: Oh, thank you.

I’ll take you up on that.

A: Your're welcome.

Then, give me a miniute, let me check.

B: Thanks!

A: Is this the right place?

B: Well... yes!

This is it!

A: Okay, then.

Let's go.

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sho

May 22, 2022

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Thank you so much!!! :)

B: Do you know where I can find a Toho cinemas?

A: Is there in this cityDo Toho have any cinemas in here/[insert city name]?

A: Your're welcome.

Then, give me a miniute, let me check.

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Nice - idiomatic! Hardly any mistakes :)

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sho

May 22, 2022

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Thank you so much!!! :)

You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.


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I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️


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By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.


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B: Excuse me.


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Do you speak English?


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A: Uh-, sorry.


A: Uh-,... sorry.

This is quite a small thing, but I think that the ellipsis "..." is good here.

I’m bad at English.


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But is there anything I can do for you?


But iIs there anything I can do for you?

I think it would be better to say something like "Can I help you with something?".

B: Do you know where I can find Toho cinemas?


B: Do you know where I can find a Toho cinemas?

B: Do you know where I can find Toho cCinemas?

Is "Toho Cinemas" the full name of the place? If so, both words must be capitalized.

A: Is there in this city?


A: Is there in this cityDo Toho have any cinemas in here/[insert city name]?

A: Is there one in this city?

B: Yes.


B: Yes, probably.

Probably.


Probably.

A: Uh-, sorry.


A: Uh-,... sorry.

I don't know.


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I'm not too busy, so I'll check the route now and I can show you, if you want.


I'm not too busy, so I'll check the route now and I can show you, if you want.

You wouldn't tell them that you're checking the route if you aren't even sure yet that the place exists in the city!

B: Oh, really?


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A: Of course!


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B: Oh, thank you.


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I’ll take you up on that.


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A: Your welcome.


A: Your're welcome.

A: Your're welcome.

Then, give me a mini, let me check.


Then, give me a miniute, let me check.

Then, give me a miniute, let me check.

B: Thanks!


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A: Is this the right place?


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B: Well... yes!


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This is it!


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A: Okay, then.


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Let's go.


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Give directions 13


Giveing directions 13

I wanna speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


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Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


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