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I wanna speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.




B: Pardon me. How can I get to Akabane station?
A: Well, gimme a mini. Ok.(※I'm using an app to look up train lines.)
B: That app is good. What's it name?
A: Well, "Japan travel".
I guess this is so useful for foreigner because you can look up Japanese train lines in English. Anyway, let's get back to the main tpic.
(※I'm using that app to explain)
Can you understand the explanation when you look at this screen? If you can, I think if you downloaded it that would solve the problem? Or if you don't wanna download it, I'll explain it in by my app.
B: Well... I think..... I got it. But I'll pass now.
A: Okay. Then let me explain.
B: Thank you!
A: As of now, please ride the train leaving at 15:15 heading towards Nakameguro from platform 1, and get off at Ueno.
And then take the train leaving at 15:55 heading towards Koganei from platform 5 of the JR, and that train will take you to Akabane.
B: Got it! Anyway, what's JR?
A: A railway company. It has many train lines all over Japan.
B: I see.
A: If you can't catch the 55-minute train, get on the next train heading towards Takasaki on the same platform!
B: Mu-huh.
So, I take the train leaving at 15:15 heading towards Nakameguro from platform 1, and get off at Ueno and then take the train leaving at 15:55 heading towards Koganei from platform 5 of the JR, or towards Takasaki.
A: That is correct.
Also the first train is the Tobu Skytree Line, the next is the JR Utunomiya Line. But if you fail to catch the 55-minute train, the line will also change from the Utsunomiya line to the Takasaki line.
B:Oh, I got it.
Anyway, does that app tell you the time of the next train?
A: Yes, this is it.
It seems that the train you take from Ueno leaves every 10 minutes or so. Why don't you take a picture of this, just in case?
B Yeah! Exactly! I will!
Ok. Thank you.
A: Oh, also again, Japanese trains are of various types, such as local, rapid, section express, limited express, semi-express, and they they stop at different stations depending on the train, so even if they have the same line's name and platform, so make sure that the time and destination in the app match the train you are on.
B: Where does it say express or and stuff like that in this app?
A: Well... I don't know, haha. But, as long as the time and destination of the train you wanna take isn't wrong, it'll work!
Also, haha. Transferring trains at Ueno is a bit difficult, so if you get confused, it might be more accurate to ask the station staff or someone looks kind.
B: Why is it difficult?
A: I think you have to exit the ticket gate and walk a bit. Probably.
B: I see.
A: Oops! I've speaked too much!
Your train's arriving soon!!
B: Oh my god, really?!
A: Anyway, the best of luck!!
B: Oh, thank you so much! I really appreciate it. (He started running.)
A: You're welcome! your first train’s from No.1! Take care!
B: I got it! Thank you! You too!