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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you find in a textbook, please correct me so that I can sound like a native🙇‍♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

B: Excuse me? Do you know where Hara Community Centre is?
A: Yeah.
B: Can you tell me how to get to there?
A: Sure! Well, you need to turn right there, and then turn right again at the end. And turn left at the next corner. Then go straight there. From here, my memory is a little fuzzy, but I guess... take the first or second turn to the left. If it's dead-ends at houses, that's not the corner, so look for another corner, and if you see a corner where the road keeps going, turn left there, I guess the second corner. And then keep going straight until you see a house on the left surrounded by trees. That's the community center. Sorry, that was complicated to explain. Let me say it one more time.
B: Thank you. Let me write it down.
A: Okay. First, turn right there. Second, turn right at the end. Third, turn left at the next corner. Fourth, if you see a straight path around there, go straight there. Last, turn left and go straight on the road that seems to continue, then a house on the left surrounded by trees is the one. Are you going to be OK? Let me see.
B: Yeah, please check.
A: Yes, looks ok, if I'm not mistaken in my explanation. haha
B: I hope so. haha
A: If it doesn't seem to work, ask someone else again. Good luck.
B: Okay. That's a big help. Thank you so much! Have a nice day!
A: You too!

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Give ding Directions 1

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook, so please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇‍♂️

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

B: Excuse me?

Do you know where Hara Community Centrer is?

"Center" is the American spelling.

A: Yeah.

B: Can you tell me how to get to there?

A: Sure!

Well, you need to turn right there, and then turn right again at the end of the road.

AndThen turn left at the next corner.

Then go straight from there.

From here, my memory is a little fuzzy, but I guess... take the first or second turn ton the left.

If it's dead-ends at houses, that's not the corner, so look for another corner, and, if you see a corner where the road keeps going, turn left there,. I guess it's the second corner.

And then keep going straight until you see a house on the left surrounded by trees.

That's the community center.

Sorry, that wasI made that sound complicated to explain.

Let me say it one more time.

B: Thank you.

Let me write it down.

A: Okay.

First, turn right there.

Second, turn right at the end of the road.

Third, turn left at the next corner.

Fourth, if you see a straight path around there, go straight there.

Last, turn left and go straight on the road that seems to continue, then a house on the left surrounded by trees is the one.

Are you going to be OK?

Let me see.

B: Yeah, please check.

A: Yes, it looks okay, if I'm not mistaken in my explanation.

haha

B: I hope so.

haha

A: If it doesn't seem to work, ask someone else again.

Good luck.

B: Okay.

That's a big help.

Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

A: You, too!

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April 10, 2023

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ありがとうございます!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

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A: You too!


A: You, too!

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Give ding Directions 1

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you find in a textbook, please correct me so that I can sound like a native🙇‍♂️


I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook, so please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇‍♂️

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!


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B: Excuse me?


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Do you know where Hara Community Centre is?


Do you know where Hara Community Centrer is?

"Center" is the American spelling.

A: Yeah.


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B: Can you tell me how to get to there?


B: Can you tell me how to get to there?

A: Sure!


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Well, you need to turn right there, and then turn right again at the end.


Well, you need to turn right there, and then turn right again at the end of the road.

And turn left at the next corner.


AndThen turn left at the next corner.

Then go straight there.


Then go straight from there.

From here, my memory is a little fuzzy, but I guess... take the first or second turn to the left.


From here, my memory is a little fuzzy, but I guess... take the first or second turn ton the left.

If it's dead-ends at houses, that's not the corner, so look for another corner, and if you see a corner where the road keeps going, turn left there, I guess the second corner.


If it's dead-ends at houses, that's not the corner, so look for another corner, and, if you see a corner where the road keeps going, turn left there,. I guess it's the second corner.

And then keep going straight until you see a house on the left surrounded by trees.


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That's the community center.


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Sorry, that was complicated to explain.


Sorry, that wasI made that sound complicated to explain.

Let me say it one more time.


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B: Thank you.


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Let me write it down.


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A: Okay.


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First, turn right there.


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Second, turn right at the end.


Second, turn right at the end of the road.

Third, turn left at the next corner.


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Fourth, if you see a straight path around there, go straight there.


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Last, turn left and go straight on the road that seems to continue, then a house on the left surrounded by trees is the one.


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Are you going to be OK?


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Let me see.


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B: Yeah, please check.


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A: Yes, looks ok, if I'm not mistaken in my explanation.


A: Yes, it looks okay, if I'm not mistaken in my explanation.

haha


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B: I hope so.


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haha


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A: If it doesn't seem to work, ask someone else again.


A: If it doesn't seem to work, ask someone else again.

Good luck.


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B: Okay.


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That's a big help.


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Thank you so much!


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