June 22, 2022
Giuliano Da Empoli
I would like to write some words about the writer and advisor Giuliano Da Empoli. I have discovered him by chance when listening to a podcast on the website "France culture". The personage attracted me, so that I decided to write some words about him.
Da Empoli possesses the Swiss nationality. He was born in Paris and raised in Rome, where he got a law degree. Furthermore, he pursued advanced studies in political science in Paris, where he has been living since then.
Da Empoli has worked as an advisor for the Italian government. He is the founder of the think-tank Volta, whose aim is the enhancement of the relationship among the European countries.
Though the Swiss has been active on the political field, I would rather emphasize his labour as a writer on the same area. He is the author of more than a dozen essays on the matter, focusing on Italian politics, the USA or China. This year, he has published a work about China, disscussing its evolution over the last 20 years.
I have enjoyed the lecture of his previous book: the engineers of chaos, since it is focused on the interplay between politics and social networks and how the latests can play a crucial role in order to carry out marketing campaigns highly user-oriented. Nevertheless, this can be a good theme for a next writting
Giuliano Da Empoli
I would like to write some words about the writer and advisor Giuliano Da Empoli.
I have discovered him by chance when listening to a podcast on the website "France culture" the website.
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Implies passion.
Da Empoli possesses the Swiss nationality.
He was born in Paris and raised in Rome, where he gotacquired a law degree.
Furthermore, he pursued advanced studies in political science in Paris, where he has been living since then.
No need to use “then”; which is implied by the use of past verbs, and since implies a continuing action in the present.
Da Empoli has worked as an advisor for the Italian government.
He is the founder of the think-tank Volta, whose aim is the enhancement of the relationships among thest European countries.
Though the Swiss has been rather active oin the political field, I would rather emphasize his labour as a writer oin the same area.
Gorgeous sentence, just grammar!
He is the author of more than a dozen essays on the matter, focualising on Italian politics, the USA or China, American and Chinese politics.
Grammar and more sophisticated phrasing
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Nevertheless, this can be a good theme for a his next writtingentry.
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Very good, very sophisticated. Loved it! Could feel your passion for the topic through the words!
July 19, 2022
Thanks again for your corrections, Frannie!
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I would like to write some words about the writer and advisor Giuliano Da Empoli.
I have discovered him by chance when listening to a podcast on the website "France culture".
The personage attrac interested me, so that I decided to write some words about him.
"personage" should be "person" and "interested" sounds more natural than "attracted". removed some unnecessary words also!
He was born in Paris and raised in Rome, where he got a law degree.
Furthermore, he pursued advanced studies in political science in Paris, where he has been living since then.
Da Empoli has worked as an advisor for the Italian government.
He is the founder of the think-tank Volta, whose aim is the enhancement of the relationship among the European countries.
Though the Swiss has been active on the political field, I would rather emphasize his labourwork as a writer on the same area.
"labour" isn't wrong but it's more natural to say "work"
He is the author of more than a dozen essays on the matter, focusing on Italian politics, the USA orand China.
changed "and" to "or"
This year, he has published a work about China, disscussing its evolution over the last 20 years.
I have enjoyed the lecture of his previous book: the engineers of chaos, since it is focused on the interplay between politics and social networks and how the latestster can play a crucial role in order to carry out marketing campaigns highly user-oriented.
changed "latests" to "latter" which is what I think you meant.
Nevertheless, this can be a good theme for a nextfuture writting
no need to say "a", and "future" is better than "next"
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:) great work!!
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The personage attracted me, so that I decided to write some words about him. The person "personage" should be "person" and "interested" sounds more natural than "attracted". removed some unnecessary words also!
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