Aug. 13, 2020
Girlfriend
I broke up with my girlfriend about two weeks ago. I had been going out with her for about ten months. One of the reasons is that we had decided to break up when I go to study abroad next year, but the main reason is that I was growing apart from my girlfriend and she couldn't stand it. Although I didn't want to break up with her, I couldn't hold her up because the fault is mine. She was beautiful, attractive, and thoughtful to everything like animals, plants and things like that. I really love her inner beauty. I wish her happiness from the bottom of my heart.
Girlfriend
I broke up with my girlfriend about two weeks ago.
I had been going out withdating her for about ten months.
"dating" is a nicer word to use in this sentence, however "going out with" is fine to say also and is commonly used
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She was beautiful, attractive, and thoughtful to everything likeand everyone, even animals, plants and things like that.more.
Putting "more" at the end is a more thought through way of ending the sentence
I really love her inner beauty.
I wish her all the happiness from the bottom of my heart.
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A well written piece that reads very well, good job
Aug. 14, 2020
Thank you for your correction.
I broke up with my girlfriend about two weeks ago.
I had been going out with her for about ten months.
One of the reasons is that we had decided to break up when I goas that I'm going to study abroad next year, but the main reason is that I was growing apart from my girlfriend and she couldn't stand it.
Although I didn't want to break up with her, I couldn't hold her up because the fault is mine.
She was beautiful, attractive, and thoughtful to everything like animals, plants and things like that.
I really love her inner beauty.
I wish her happiness from the bottom of my heart.
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I'm sorry. I hope you feel better soon.
Aug. 14, 2020
Thank you. I hope she feel better soon too.
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I had been going out with her for about ten months. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I had been "dating" is a nicer word to use in this sentence, however "going out with" is fine to say also and is commonly used |
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One of the reasons is that we had decided to break up when I go to study abroad next year, but the main reason is that I was growing apart from my girlfriend and she couldn't stand it. One of the reasons One of the reasons |
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Although I didn't want to break up with her, I couldn't hold her up because the fault is mine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Although I didn't want to break up with her, I couldn't hold her |
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She was beautiful, attractive, and thoughtful to everything like animals, plants and things like that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! She was beautiful, attractive, and thoughtful to everything Putting "more" at the end is a more thought through way of ending the sentence |
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I really love her inner beauty. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I wish her happiness from the bottom of my heart. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I wish her all the happiness from the bottom of my heart. |
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