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xiangying

Dec. 8, 2021

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Gingerbread house

Today, we made a gingerbread house together on line.
My teacher played us an instructional video of making a gingerbread house and cheerful music.
I love this activity. It made me very happy. My classmate said that making gingerbread house reminded him of the happy childhood.
My childhood was not happy,no toys and dolls. Only my cat and book with me. My childhood was all about study and study. Because study is the only way I can change my destiny. I spent a very lonely childhood.
Looking at the beautiful gingerbread house I decorated, my tears fell. As an adult in a foreign country, I felt the joy of childhood.

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Today, we made a gingerbread house together on line.

My teacher played us an instructional video ofabout making a gingerbread house ands with cheerful music.

My classmate said that making gingerbread house reminded him of thehis happy childhood.

My childhood was not happy,no toys and dolls.

Only my cat and books with me.

I would use plural "books" unless you're talking only about one specific book.

Because study ing was the only way I canould change my destiny.

I spenthad a very lonely childhood.

Gingerbread house


Today, we made a gingerbread house together on line.


Today, we made a gingerbread house together on line.

My teacher played us an instructional video of making a gingerbread house and cheerful music.


My teacher played us an instructional video ofabout making a gingerbread house ands with cheerful music.

I love this activity.


It made me very happy.


My classmate said that making gingerbread house reminded him of the happy childhood.


My classmate said that making gingerbread house reminded him of thehis happy childhood.

My childhood was not happy,no toys and dolls.


My childhood was not happy,no toys and dolls.

Only my cat and book with me.


Only my cat and books with me.

I would use plural "books" unless you're talking only about one specific book.

My childhood was all about study and study.


Because study is the only way I can change my destiny.


Because study ing was the only way I canould change my destiny.

I spent a very lonely childhood.


I spenthad a very lonely childhood.

Looking at the beautiful gingerbread house I decorated, my tears fell.


As an adult in a foreign country, I felt the joy of childhood.


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