Feb. 16, 2021
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I've never thought I've graduated from my college(=secondary school here) for ten years. All these years I've always dreamed about my school life. To be honest I'm not even sure if I regretted my own performance in public exam, or simply reminisced about the old days. Wearing yellowish school uniform and keeping the books on my hands, I simply lost the thread of my thoughts, just wandering around the school. It still stands out in my mind that during the day i was such an ardent student devouring books inside out. To the others, I was kind of a freak or a nerd. To me, perhaps I was just a normal kid you meet in your everyday life. Back in the day times were not always tough I still had spare time to fritter away, but ten years later, how much can I waste? I can't help reflecting on what I did there. But reflect doesn't help at all, stuck in the past won't do anything but just keep you being suck down the rabbit hole. I need to move on, I need to get a new lease of life.
Gibberish
I've never thought I've graduated from my college(=secondary school here) for ten years.
This sentence is very ambiguous to me. I think you need a different tense to make it more clear what you mean. Perhaps simplify the sentence. Do you mean "I can't believe I graduated from college 10 years ago" ?
All these years I've always have been dreameding about my school life.
To be honest I'm not even sure if I regretted my own performance in the public exam, or simply reminisced about the old days.
Wearing my yellowish school uniform and keeping the books oin my hands, I simply lost the thread of my thoughts, just wandering around the school.
It still stands out in my mind that during the day i was such an ardent student devouring books inside out.
To the others, I was kind of a freak or a nerd.
To me, perhaps I was just a normal kid you meet in your everyday life.
Back in tThe day times were not always tough, I still had spare time to fritter away, but ten years later, how much can I waste?
I can't help reflecting on what I did there.
But reflect doeion isn't helpful at all,. Being stuck in the past won't do anything but just keep you being suck down the rabbit hole.
I need to move on, I need to get a new lease of life.
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Excellent vocabulary! Maybe you could make your sentences more simple to make sure your meaning is more clear :)
Well Done :)
Feb. 18, 2021
thank you so much!
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I've never thought I've graduated from my college(=secondary school here) for ten years. I've never thought I've graduated from my college(=secondary school here) for ten years. This sentence is very ambiguous to me. I think you need a different tense to make it more clear what you mean. Perhaps simplify the sentence. Do you mean "I can't believe I graduated from college 10 years ago" ? |
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All these years I've always dreamed about my school life. All these years I |
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To be honest I'm not even sure if I regretted my own performance in public exam, or simply reminisced about the old days. To be honest I'm not even sure if I regret |
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Wearing yellowish school uniform and keeping the books on my hands, I simply lost the thread of my thoughts, just wandering around the school. Wearing my yellowish school uniform and keeping the books |
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It still stands out in my mind that during the day i was such an ardent student devouring books inside out. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To the others, I was kind of a freak or a nerd. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To me, perhaps I was just a normal kid you meet in your everyday life. To me, |
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Back in the day times were not always tough I still had spare time to fritter away, but ten years later, how much can I waste?
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I can't help reflecting on what I did there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But reflect doesn't help at all, stuck in the past won't do anything but just keep you being suck down the rabbit hole. But reflect |
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I need to move on, I need to get a new lease of life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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