Aug. 29, 2023
When I was in middle school, students were required to stay at school day and night during learning days (from Monday to Saturday. The school had dormitories and a cafeteria).
The school was in my hometown, Gongji, which was 3 kilometers away from my village.
Sometimes, I broke the rule—I went home at night (because I really missed my family). To shorten the distance, I always took a short path straight crossing through the fields (back then, people went somewhere only by walking, they didn't even have a bike).
Along the path, there were many tombs, so I had to be brave enough to walk through them. I heard many ghost stories from adults, but I didn't believe it.
Sometimes, I saw a black shadow quickly running away when I was walking on the path. I was really frightened, but I always told myself, be easy, it isn't a ghost. It must be a stray dog, pig, or something like that. Just because it is at night, I am not able to see what they really are.
I remember one day, I felt like peeing at midnight, but I couldn't open my eyes because of sleepiness. I opened the door and went to the front yard with my eyes closed (families in the countryside back then all had a large front yard, which was not what you thought that looked like a beautiful garden. They were in fact dirt ground). During this, I managed to open a crack in my eyes, in order not to be tripped by something.
I suddenly saw a black column right in front of me, and I was really scared at that moment. But I immediately told myself, no worries, it was in my home—there wouldn't be any ghosts in my home.
I always thought that if you were facing evil, the only way to overcome it was to be more evil than it. So I decided to pee towards it. I immediately knew that it was not a ghost as soon as I heard the sound when I was peeing it. But I still didn't know what the hell it really was—I had never seen this kind of thing in my front yard.
After I finished the pee, I didn't feel that sleepy, and I could open my eyes. I thought I needed to figure out what the hell it really was. Otherwise, I couldn't fall asleep again, and it would upset me for the rest of my life.
Yet ironically, it turned out that it was the basket my family used to wash the straw for our cattle. It was a tall basket with a wide opening and a narrow bottom. But somehow someone put it upside down.
Even now, I still don't believe in ghosts, but I have to admit that I do feel scared under some circumstances. In my opinion, if you trust ghosts, they exist. If you don't believe them, they don't exist.
Ghosts
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The school was in my hometown, Gongji, which was 3 kilometers away from my village.
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It was a tall basket with a wide opening and a narrow bottom.
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Even now, I still don't believe in ghosts, but I have to admit that I do feel scared under somecertain circumstances.
In my opinion, if you trustbelieve in ghosts, then they exist.
If you don't believe in them, they don't exist.
Ghosts
When I was in middle school, students were required to stay at school day and night during learningschool days (from Monday to Saturday).
The school had dormitories and a cafeteria).
The school was in my hometown, Gongji, which was 3 kilometers away from my village.
Sometimes, I broke the rule—I went home at night (because I really missed my family).
To shorten the distance, I always took a short path straight crossingwhich crossed straight through the fields (back then, people went somewhere only by walking, they didn't even have a bike).
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Along the path, there were many tombs, so I had to be brave enough to walk through them.
I heard many ghost stories from adults, but I didn't believe it.
Sometimes, I saw a black shadow quickly running away when I was walking on the path.
I was really frightened, but I always told myself, be easyrelax, it isn't a ghost.
"Be easy" isn't a phrase we use to mean to stay calm. You can say relax, stay calm, keep your cool, don't worry, etc.
It must be a stray dog, pig, or something like that.
If you are in the moment - crossing the field - you can say, "it must be X." But if you are now recalling the story that already happened, you should phrase this as, "it must have been X."
Just bBecause it iwas at night, I am not able tocouldn't see what they really awere.
Again, we should use past tense because you are retelling events that already happened. I removed "just," the reason being that "just because" carries a certain tone that doesn't apply to this sentence. Often, it is used for a sentence structure like the following, "Just because you are on a diet doesn't mean you can't eat good food." It's like saying "Even though / despite"
I remember one day, I felt like peeing at midnight, but I couldn't open my eyes because of sleepiness.
I opened the door and went to the front yard with my eyes closed (families in the countryside back then all had a large front yard, which was not what you thought that looked likewould consider a beautiful garden.
They were in fact dirtbarren ground).
During this, I managed to open a crack in my eyesmy eyes a crack, in order not to be tripped by something.
I suddenly saw a black column right in front of me, and I was really scared at that moment.
But I immediately told myself, no worries, it was in my home—there wouldn't be any ghosts in my home.
I always thought that if you were facing evil, the only way to overcome it was to be more evil than it.
So I decided to pee towards it.
I immediately knew that it was not a ghost as soon as I heard the sound when I was peeing on it.
But I still didn't know what the hell it really was—I had never seen this kind of thing in my front yard.
After I finished the pee, I didn't feel that sleepy, and I could open my eyes.
I thought I needed to figure out what the hell it really was.
Otherwise, I couldn't fall asleep again, and it would upset me for the rest of my life.
It was a tall basket with a wide opening and a narrow bottom.
But somehow someone put it upside down.
Even now, I still don't believe in ghosts, but I have to admit that I do feel scared under some circumstances.
In my opinion, if you trustbelieve in ghosts, they exist.
If you don't believe in them, they don't exist.
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I was really frightened, but I always told myself, be easy, it isn't a ghost. I was really frightened, but I always told myself, "Be easy" isn't a phrase we use to mean to stay calm. You can say relax, stay calm, keep your cool, don't worry, etc. I was really frightened, but I'd always t |
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Just because it is at night, I am not able to see what they really are.
Again, we should use past tense because you are retelling events that already happened. I removed "just," the reason being that "just because" carries a certain tone that doesn't apply to this sentence. Often, it is used for a sentence structure like the following, "Just because you are on a diet doesn't mean you can't eat good food." It's like saying "Even though / despite"
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