April 29, 2020
Ghostbusters
I watched the movie, Ghostbusters which was a newer one. Four women were the ghost hunters. It was very funny. I think the movie made me laugh a lot, so my little depression had been blown away.
I think I need more movies like it, not so serious. Would you recommend me one?
Ghostbusters
I watched the newer remake of the movie, Ghostbusters which was a newer one.
Four women were the ghost huntersThe ghostbusters were four women.
The original was also correct, but since your topic is ghostbusters, this wording makes more sense.
It was very funny.
I think the movie made me laugh a lot, soand it blew away my little depression had been blown away.¶
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Also, in the phrasing you had, you should we it e “has been blown away,” since we are describing a present state.
I think I need more movies like it, nones that aren’t so serious.
Would you recommend me one?
April 29, 2020
Thank you for your correction!
I can learn from it a lot!!
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Ghostbusters This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I watched the movie, Ghostbusters which was a newer one. I watched the newer remake of the movie |
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Four women were the ghost hunters.
The original was also correct, but since your topic is ghostbusters, this wording makes more sense. |
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It was very funny. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think the movie made me laugh a lot, so my little depression had been blown away. I think the movie made me laugh a lot, |
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I think I need more movies like it, not so serious. I think I need more movies like it, |
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Would you recommend me one? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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