Ghaza situation
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Ghaza's current situation is truly appalling. How can people don't see the unfairness? How can we live in a normal way and the others can't find the basics of life—something to eat or drink? Where are the human rights? Did we lose our humanity? or we aren't equal in this word? or your life is more important than the others? A lot of questions came to my mind every day. Ghaza showed the truth of this word. We live like animals. The strongest can do anything he want for the weak. I think we need to wake up and face the truth. The world cannot be made equal by humans. We need to follow a repair that can lead us to an equal life. The only one is created by god.
GhazaGhazzah situation
The most common spelling in English is "Gaza". However, if you want to use the spelling that scholars of Arabic would use when accurately transliterating the word غزة, then a common form would be "Ghazzah". The double "z" reflects the gemination in the sound زّ.
How can people don'tnot see the unfairness?
How can we live in a normal way and the othersgo about our mundane lives normally whilst people can't find the basics of life — something to eat or drink?
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In speaking, your formulation could work if you say it with a clear questioning intonation. But in writing, the subject should come first in main-clause questions.
orOr is your life is more important than thethose of others?
A lot of questions camecome to my mind every day.
"come", because it is habitual — it repeats at sporadic points throughout the day, everyday.
Ghaza showeduncovered the truthtrue face of this wordworld.
The strongeststrong can dounleash anything he want forupon the weak.
We need to follow a repairremedy that can lead us to an equal life.
"Repair" is perhaps not what you're seeking to convey. I'm assuming you're trying to translate تَصْليح from Arabic. In that case, you would say "remedy". For example: "A repair was performed on a car", "The judge ordered the defendant to pay compensation to the victim, as a remedy".
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Overall feedback
I believe every human has humanity, but many of us in the West refuse to view people in the Middle East as humans. All of the evidence and media reporting is there, but people often simply don't look at them. Even some people in Tel Aviv–Jaffa now are holding up banners in front of the defence ministry, calling the situation in Gaza a "genocide". Yet some politicians in the West would smear people as "antisemites" when they call a spade a spade. If you have follow-up questions, don't hesitate to ask.
How can people don'tnot see the unfairness?
How can we live in a normal way and thelife while others can't findaren't allowed the basics of life—something to eat or drink?
Where are thetheir human rights?
orAre we aren'tnot equal in this word?
orIs your life is more important than the others?
A lot of questions camecome to my mind every day.
The strongest can do anything hethey want forto the weak.
We need to follow a repairreligion that can lead us to an equal life.
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