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Should you attend college at home or abroad?
After graduating from high school, you might want to pursue your studies in college. Choice can be given whether to attend school in your contry or abroad. First, I will give the advantages of studying abroad, then I will talk about the drawbacks.
Studying abroad have several advantages. First, it allows you to discover different cultures, and meet new people. These people can have different customs, which can be very interesting. Furthermore, some colleges are very prestigeous abroad. Attending them can have a significant impact on your CV, and help you find a job. Studying abroad allows to learn languages. Indeed, you are immersed in the country, and therefore not able to speak your native language, assuming that your native language is different from the country of your college. Although studying abroad has advantages, there are also disadvantages.
First, it is very expensive. You have to find an accommodation and pay the rent. Therefore, you need to save money beforehand. Moreover, if you study abroad, you will live far from your parents and consequently feel lonely. Furthermore, you will have to communicate in a foreign language, where your level is lower than your native language.
In conclusion, studying abroad has advantages and disadvantages. It allows you to meet new people and add experience in your CV, but can also be daunting due to the language barrier and the different types of fees.
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After graduating from high school, you might want to pursue your studies in college.
Choice can be given whether toTwo choices are attending school in your country or abroad.
Two choices are attending school in your country or abroad.
"A choice can be given" isn't wrong exactly, but it sounds awkward.
First, I will give the advantages of studying abroad, then I will talk about the drawbacks.
Studying abroad haves several advantages.
Studying abroad has several advantages.
First, it allows you to discover different cultures, and meet new people.
These people can have different customs, which can be very interesting.
Furthermore, some colleges abroad are very prestigeious abroad.
Furthermore, some colleges abroad are very prestigious.
Putting abroad at the end of the sentence makes it sound like the prestige is abroad, not the college itself.
Attending them can have a significant impact on your CV, and help you find a job.
Studying abroad (also) allows you to learn languages. Studying abroad (also) allows you to learn languages.
You don't *need* the also, but it sounds more natural in the context of listing off benefits.
Indeed, you are immersed in the country, and therefore not able to speak your native language, assuming that your native language is different from the country of your college.
Although studying abroad has advantages, there are also disadvantages.
First, it is very expensive.
You have to find an accommodation and pay thefor rent.
You have to find an accommodation and pay for rent.
'Pay the rent' isn't wrong, but 'pay for rent' is more natural in this context. 'Pay the rent' is usually used in the context of speaking with a person you are living with, or to yourself. "We have to pay the rent", or "Oops, I forgot to pay the rent".
Therefore, you need to save money beforehand.
Moreover, if you study abroad, you will live far from your parents and consequently feel lonely.
Furthermore, you will have to communicate in a foreign language, where your level is lower than your native language.
In conclusion, studying abroad has advantages and disadvantages.
It allows you to meet new people and add experience in your CV, but can also be daunting due to the language barrier and the different types of fees. It allows you to meet new people and add experience in your CV, but can also be daunting due to the language barrier and the different types of fees.
'and different types of fees' feels unnatural. Personally, I would say 'and all the expenses', or 'and the various expenses'.
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Only a couple of actual mistakes, and they were very minor. No problem at all understanding what you wrote. Great work!
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Should you attend college at home or abroad? |
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After graduating from high school, you might want to pursue your studies in college. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Choice can be given whether to attend school in your contry or abroad.
"A choice can be given" isn't wrong exactly, but it sounds awkward. |
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First, I will give the advantages of studying abroad, then I will talk about the drawbacks. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Studying abroad have several advantages.
Studying abroad ha |
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First, it allows you to discover different cultures, and meet new people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These people can have different customs, which can be very interesting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Furthermore, some colleges are very prestigeous abroad.
Furthermore, some colleges abroad are very prestig Putting abroad at the end of the sentence makes it sound like the prestige is abroad, not the college itself. |
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Attending them can have a significant impact on your CV, and help you find a job. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Studying abroad allows to learn languages. Studying abroad (also) allows you to learn languages. Studying abroad (also) allows you to learn languages. You don't *need* the also, but it sounds more natural in the context of listing off benefits. |
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Indeed, you are immersed in the country, and therefore not able to speak your native language, assuming that your native language is different from the country of your college. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Although studying abroad has advantages, there are also disadvantages. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First, it is very expensive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You have to find an accommodation and pay the rent.
You have to find an accommodation and pay 'Pay the rent' isn't wrong, but 'pay for rent' is more natural in this context. 'Pay the rent' is usually used in the context of speaking with a person you are living with, or to yourself. "We have to pay the rent", or "Oops, I forgot to pay the rent". |
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Therefore, you need to save money beforehand. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover, if you study abroad, you will live far from your parents and consequently feel lonely. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Furthermore, you will have to communicate in a foreign language, where your level is lower than your native language. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In conclusion, studying abroad has advantages and disadvantages. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It allows you to meet new people and add experience in your CV, but can also be daunting due to the language barrier and the different types of fees. It allows you to meet new people and add experience in your CV, but can also be daunting due to the language barrier and the different types of fees. It allows you to meet new people and add experience in your CV, but can also be daunting due to the language barrier and the different types of fees. 'and different types of fees' feels unnatural. Personally, I would say 'and all the expenses', or 'and the various expenses'. |
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