March 26, 2021
Shogunzuka is a small mountain which places the center of Kyoto city, and it's famous for the night view. According to history, the emperor had people buried a cray figure having armor, a helmet, and weapons there in order to protect Kyoto. (Kyoto was the capital city at that time.) There is a myth that this mountain vibrated when significant things happened in Japan.
Shogunzuka
Shogunzuka is a small mountain which placesis located at the center of Kyoto city, and it's famous for theits night view of Kyoto.
Shogunzuka is a small mountain which is located at the center of Kyoto city, and it's famous for its night view of Kyoto.
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According to history, the emperor had people buriedy a crlay figure havingwith armor, a helmet, and weapons there in order to protect Kyoto.
According to history, the emperor had people bury a clay figure with armor, a helmet, and weapons there in order to protect Kyoto.
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(Kyoto was the capital city at that time.) There is a myth that this mountain vibrated when something significant things happened in Japan.
(Kyoto was the capital city at that time.) There is a myth that this mountain vibrated when something significant happened in Japan.
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Shogunzuka
Shogunzuka is a small mountain which placesys at the center of Kyoto city, and it's famous for theits view at night view.
Shogunzuka is a small mountain which lays at the center of Kyoto city, and is famous for its view at night.
According to history, the emperor had people buriedy a crlay figure having armor, a helmet, and weapons there in order to protect Kyoto.
According to history, the emperor had people bury a clay figure having armor, a helmet, and weapons there in order to protect Kyoto.
(Kyoto was the capital city at that time.) T, and there is a myth that this mountain vibrated when significant things happened in Japan.
Kyoto was the capital city at that time, and there is a myth that this mountain vibrated when significant things happened in Japan.
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Shogunzuka
Shogunzuka is a small mountain which placesin the center of Kyoto city, and it's famous for theits appearance at night view.
Shogunzuka is a small mountain in the center of Kyoto city, and it's famous for its appearance at night.
According to historylegend, the emperor had people buriedy a crlay figure havpossessing armor, a helmet, and weapons there in order to protect Kyoto.
According to legend, the emperor had people bury a clay figure possessing armor, a helmet, and weapons there in order to protect Kyoto.
I don't really know what you meant by "According to history", as this phrase doesn't really make sense. If what you're writing about refers to some historical document, then you could replace "legend" with "historical sources".
(Kyoto was the capital city at that time.). There is a myth that this mountain vibrateds when significant things happened in Japan.
(Kyoto was the capital city at that time). There is a myth that this mountain vibrates when significant things happen in Japan.
The second sentence was technically correct but didn't really make sense in larger context, so I changed the tense of the verbs.
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Shogunzuka is a small mountain which places the center of Kyoto city, and it's famous for the night view.
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According to history, the emperor had people buried a cray figure having armor, a helmet, and weapons there in order to protect Kyoto.
According to I don't really know what you meant by "According to history", as this phrase doesn't really make sense. If what you're writing about refers to some historical document, then you could replace "legend" with "historical sources".
According to history, the emperor had people bur
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(Kyoto was the capital city at that time.) There is a myth that this mountain vibrated when significant things happened in Japan.
(Kyoto was the capital city at that time The second sentence was technically correct but didn't really make sense in larger context, so I changed the tense of the verbs.
(Kyoto was the capital city at that time.) There is a myth that this mountain vibrated when something significant US alternative |
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