Many people use these transport to go to work, university... or other places etc. Many people use these transport to go to work, university etc.

Etc would be perfect here

Many people use these means of transport to go to work, university..., or other places. Many people use these means of transport to go to work, university, or other places.

The ... isn't needed if you're mentioning other places.

What do you think ? What do you think?

I think that this method it is important, because if we go on public transport, you can reduced the pollution. I think that this method is important, because if we go on public transport, you can reduce the pollution.

I think that this method it is important, because if we go onusing public transport, you can reduced thes air pollution. I think that this method is important, because using public transport reduces air pollution.

Avoid putting two conjunctions together.

Nevertheless, public transport is less comfortable than own transportusing your own car. Nevertheless, public transport is less comfortable than using your own car.

I'm assuming that you're talking about using your own car here.

For this reason, forso we can avoid that people preferchoose the second option, the public transport should have more facilities and must be free for all people, because nowadays these transports are so expensive and all peopleveryone cannot afford to buy their tickets. For this reason, so we can avoid that people choose the second option, public transport should have more facilities and must be free for all people, because nowadays these transports are so expensive and everyone cannot afford to buy their tickets.

For this reason, for we can avoid that people prefer the second option,To encourage people to use the public transport more frequently, it should have more facilities and. It must also be free for all peopleveryone, because nowadayscurrently these transporickets are sovery expensive and all peoplnot everyone cannot afford to buy their ticketshem. To encourage people to use the public transport more frequently, it should have more facilities. It must also be free for everyone, because currently the tickets are very expensive and not everyone can afford them.

Breaking sentences helps the reader as well as the writer.

It is oin august and I study for the b1 level. It is in august and I study for the b1 level.

I would like to know if my writing is right for my exam. I would like to know if my writing is right for my exam.