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megu

Jan. 17, 2023

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To my teacher

Thank you for yesterday!
I actually do wanna go to Canada again and I’m interested in Vancouver thanks to you!
I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people :)
I hope you can spend great time in holidays and have a safe trip to Korea!
You don’t need to reply :)
Take care.

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To my teacher

Thank you for yesterday!

I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people :)

You don’t need to reply :)

Take care.

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megu

Jan. 18, 2023

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Thank you for yesterday!

Take care.

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megu

Jan. 18, 2023

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To my teacher

Thank you for yesterday!

Take care.

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megu

Jan. 17, 2023

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megu

Jan. 17, 2023

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To my teacher


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To my teacher, To my teacher,

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Thank you for yesterday!


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I actually do wanna go to Canada again and I’m interested in Vancouver thanks to you!


I actually do wanna go to Canada again and I’m interested in Vancouver, thanks to you! I actually do wanna go to Canada again and I’m interested in Vancouver, thanks to you!

I actually do wannat to go to Canada again andso I’m interested in Vancouver thanks to you! I actually do want to go to Canada again so I’m interested in Vancouver thanks to you!

"Wanna" is okay for speaking and writing fiction. すごいですね。

I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people :)


I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people. :) I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people. :)

I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people. :) I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people. :)

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I hope you can spend great time in holidays and have a safe trip to Korea!


I hope you can spendhave a great time during holidays and have a safe trip to Korea! I hope you have a great time during holidays and have a safe trip to Korea!

This way sounds a lot more natural

I hope you can spendhave a great time induring the holidays and (have) a safe trip to Korea! I hope you can have a great time during the holidays and (have) a safe trip to Korea!

You could omit the second “have”.

I hope you can spend great time inhave a happy holidays, and have a safe trip to Korea! I hope you have a happy holidays, and have a safe trip to Korea!

You don’t need to reply :)


You don’t need to reply. :) You don’t need to reply. :)

You don’t need to reply. :) You don’t need to reply. :)

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Take care.


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