April 3, 2026
Sharing Music
There is an art center in my town where people can experience art, both for free and for a fee. I often go there to listen to classical concerts and wind band performances. Almost every time, I see people who are blind coming to enjoy the music. I feel that they experience music more deeply than sighted people, with sharper senses and more sensitive hearts.
One day, on my way home after a concert, I saw a man tapping the ground with his cane as he walked. I wondered if I should support his arm, but then I realized that I cannot be his eyes for the rest of his life, so I thought it might be better not to interfere.
Instead, I thought that if he ever came to an art gallery, I would like to describe the paintings to him using all the expressive ability I have. However, I feel lonely because even when I go to galleries, I have never met a blind person there.
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There is an art center in my town where people can experience art, botheither for free andor for a fee.
There is an art center in my town where people can experience art, either for free or for a fee.
"Both" implies two things at the same time, so it does not make sense that something is both "free" and has a "fee." There are two options, "for free" and "for a fee," and someone visiting the art center chooses one of the options. So, "either" is the more appropriate word to use here.
However, I feel lonely, because even when I go to galleries, I have never met a blind person there. However, I feel lonely, because even when I go to galleries, I have never met a blind person there.
"However, I feel lonely" and "even when I go to galleries, I have never met a blind person there" are both independent clauses. When two independent clauses are connected by a conjunction ("because"), you should put a comma before the conjunction.
April 8, 2026
Thank you very much for reading my journal, correcting it, and giving me explanations. What you kindly wrote will remain as a record, so I will write it down in my notebook and study it carefully. Thank you very much for reading my journal and explaining English expressions to me.
I often go there to listen to classical concerts and wind bandensemble performances.
I often go there to listen to classical concerts and wind ensemble performances.
Technically band and ensemble are synonyms, but we use ensemble a lot more for large groups of people playing wind instruments or classical performances.
April 3, 2026
I often go there to listen to classical concerts and wind bandensemble performances.
Technically band and ensemble are synonyms, but we use ensemble a lot more for large groups of people playing wind instruments or classical performances.
Thank you very much for your help!
April 3, 2026
Thank you for your help! I see, I see. :)
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Instead, I thought that if he ever came to an art gallery, I would like to describe the paintings to him with all the expressive ability I have. |
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Even when I go to galleries, I have never met a blind person there, and I feel that this is not something our town can be proud of. |
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Sharing Music |
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There is an art center in my town where people can experience art, both for free and for a fee.
There is an art center in my town where people can experience art, "Both" implies two things at the same time, so it does not make sense that something is both "free" and has a "fee." There are two options, "for free" and "for a fee," and someone visiting the art center chooses one of the options. So, "either" is the more appropriate word to use here. |
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I often go there to listen to classical concerts and performances by wind bands. |
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Almost every time, I see people who are blind coming to enjoy the music. |
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I feel that they experience music more deeply than sighted people, with sharper senses and a more sensitive heart. |
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One day, on my way home after a concert, I saw a man tapping the ground with his cane as he walked. |
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I wondered if I should support his arm. |
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But I realized that I cannot be his eyes for the rest of his life, so I thought it would be better not to interfere. |
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One day, on my way home, I saw a man tapping the ground with his cane as he walked. |
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I often go there to listen to classical concerts and wind band performances.
I often go there to listen to classical concerts and wind Technically band and ensemble are synonyms, but we use ensemble a lot more for large groups of people playing wind instruments or classical performances. |
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I feel that they experience music more deeply than sighted people, with sharper senses and more sensitive hearts. |
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I wondered if I should support his arm, but then I realized that I cannot be his eyes for the rest of his life, so I thought it might be better not to interfere. |
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Instead, I thought that if he ever came to an art gallery, I would like to describe the paintings to him using all the expressive ability I have. |
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However, I feel lonely because even when I go to galleries, I have never met a blind person there. However, I feel lonely, because even when I go to galleries, I have never met a blind person there. However, I feel lonely, because even when I go to galleries, I have never met a blind person there. "However, I feel lonely" and "even when I go to galleries, I have never met a blind person there" are both independent clauses. When two independent clauses are connected by a conjunction ("because"), you should put a comma before the conjunction. |
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I feel that this is not something our town can be proud of. |
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