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This winter, I've been staying quite active physically. That means regularly going to the gym and to the swimming pool. What I really like about these sports is that afterwards I am pretty much worn out, which, paradoxically, is very pleasant. If you're worn out, you basically have no more energy left for stress or anxiety, and you can finally have some deserved rest. When it's sunny outside, I also enjoy walking and listening to music or podcasts. However, as I've written before, Russian winters aren't particularly conducive to long walks, so I have to stick with indoor activities of necessity. Besides, I've been struggling to find some decent podcasts lately. Maybe you could recommend me some?
Sports
This winter, I've been staying quite active physically.
That means regularly going to the gym and to the swimming pool.
Second "to" can optionally be left out here.
What I really like about these sports is that afterwards I am pretty much worn out, which, paradoxicactually, is very pleasant.
"Paradoxically" doesn't quite feel right here. I would use "paradoxically" to describe a nonsensical situation which seems to logically contradict itself in some way. Like if being happy made you really sad. But being worn out and feeling pleasant don't seem like direct opposites enough to warrant a "paradoxically".
If you're worn out, you basically have no more energy left for stress or anxiety, and you can finally have some deserved rest.
When it's sunny outside, I also enjoy walking and listening to music or podcasts.
However, as I've written before, Russian winters aren't particularly conducive to long walks, so I have to stick with indoor activities out of necessity.
Besides, I've been struggling to find some decent podcasts lately.
Maybe you could recommend me some?
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Very well written!
I don't listen to a whole lot of podcasts, though one of the few I do listen to is a comedy podcast called Distractible. However, sometimes their jokes can get pretty vulgar and gross (especially their more recent episodes I think). It's a podcast that maybe shouldn't be listened to on an open speaker.
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This winter, I've been staying quite active physically. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That means regularly going to the gym and to the swimming pool. That means regularly going to the gym and Second "to" can optionally be left out here. |
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What I really like about these sports is that afterwards I am pretty much worn out, which, paradoxically, is very pleasant. What I really like about these sports is that afterwards I am pretty much worn out, which, "Paradoxically" doesn't quite feel right here. I would use "paradoxically" to describe a nonsensical situation which seems to logically contradict itself in some way. Like if being happy made you really sad. But being worn out and feeling pleasant don't seem like direct opposites enough to warrant a "paradoxically". |
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If you're worn out, you basically have no more energy left for stress or anxiety, and you can finally have some deserved rest. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When it's sunny outside, I also enjoy walking and listening to music or podcasts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, as I've written before, Russian winters aren't particularly conducive to long walks, so I have to stick with indoor activities of necessity. However, as I've written before, Russian winters aren't particularly conducive to long walks, so I have to stick with indoor activities out of necessity. |
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Besides, I've been struggling to find some decent podcasts lately. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe you could recommend me some? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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