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sari

June 1, 2020

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George Floyd Protests

My area's curfew starts from tonight due to demonstration for George Floyd Protests. I saw lots of news or social media that some people looted at shops and police attacked kids or protesters. I feel sad by these news and I'm kind of tired of watching the act of violence. I really hope the police brutality ends and the racism stops in the world. Also, I wish the right person will be in charge of president next election in the US.

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My area's curfew starts from tonight due to the demonstrations for George Floyd Protests.

I saw lots of news orand social media that some people looted at shops, and police attacked kids orand protesters.

I feel saddened by theseis news, and I'm kind of tired of watching these acts of violence.

I really hope the police brutality ends and the racism stops in theis world.

Also, I wish the right person will be in charge ofas president in the next election in the US.

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I feel the same way. It's so hard to watch, because there's nothing we can do to stop it on our own.

George Floyd Protests

My area's curfew starts from tonight due to demonstration for George Floyd Protests.

I would say that "from" isn't necessary since there is no end date. Using "from" here is fine, but the sentence sounds better without it.

I saw lots of news orand social media posts that some people looted at shops and police attacked kids orand protesters.

I feel sad by theseis news and I'm kind of tired of watching these acts of violence.

I really hope theis police brutality ends and the racism stops in the world.

Also, I wish the right person will be in charge ofas president nextcome the next general elections in the U.S.

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Great piece!

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kyizu

June 8, 2020

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My area's curfew starts from tonight due to demonstration for George Floyd Protests.

My area's curfew starts tonight due to the George Floyd protests.

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kyizu

June 8, 2020

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I saw lots of news orand social media posts that some people looted at shops and police attacked kids orand protesters.

I saw lots of news and social media posts about how some people looted shops and how some police attacked kids and protesters.

George Floyd Protests


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My area's curfew starts from tonight due to demonstration for George Floyd Protests.


My area's curfew starts from tonight due to demonstration for George Floyd Protests.

I would say that "from" isn't necessary since there is no end date. Using "from" here is fine, but the sentence sounds better without it.

My area's curfew starts from tonight due to the demonstrations for George Floyd Protests.

I saw lots of news or social media that some people looted at shops and police attacked kids or protesters.


I saw lots of news orand social media posts that some people looted at shops and police attacked kids orand protesters.

I saw lots of news orand social media that some people looted at shops, and police attacked kids orand protesters.

I feel sad by these news and I'm kind of tired of watching the act of violence.


I feel sad by theseis news and I'm kind of tired of watching these acts of violence.

I feel saddened by theseis news, and I'm kind of tired of watching these acts of violence.

I really hope the police brutality ends and the racism stops in the world.


I really hope theis police brutality ends and the racism stops in the world.

I really hope the police brutality ends and the racism stops in theis world.

Also, I wish the right person will be in charge of president next election in the US.


Also, I wish the right person will be in charge ofas president nextcome the next general elections in the U.S.

Also, I wish the right person will be in charge ofas president in the next election in the US.

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