March 16, 2021
Genetic modifications
Genetic modifications are one of the most revolutionary inventions occurred in our times. Unlike the sci fi movies you can see in the cinema, genetic modification today is not such a thing like creating new arms or making the people live eternally. It is more related with be able to identify those DNA chains that make us what we are, biologically speaking.
For example, DNA define your eye, skin or even hair color before you born, but not only that kind of superficial stuff. it defines also our capability to learn, by improving the brain’s structures related with that matter, that lately, reverberate in our intelligence.
Genetic modifications also have the power to reduce down to zero all the illnesses we inherit from our parents and relatives. Image, at last, be able to end with an disease which have been affecting your family though each generation.
Modifying a reproductive cell to improve their life expectatives seems to be the holy grail of the health care to day and we are nearer each time, but not all is as good as it appears.
At first glance this practices would returns a lot of profits to the humanity, but there bring with itself its own challenges. For exampe, the older the people become, the greater is the difficult for our economic system to look after them or the assume the responsibility care them, but not only that. Today any genetic intervention involve costs over millions of millions dollars, so who will be able to access this new technology? Barriers in the access to this technology could create a society more and more inequality each time.
Genetic modifications are one of the most revolutionary inventions that has occurred in our times.
Unlike the sci -fi movies you can see in the cinema, genetic modification today is not such a thing like creating new arms or making the people live eternally.
It is more related with be able to identifying those DNA chains that make us what we are, biologically speaking.
También usted puede hablar, "It is more related with being able to identify," pero la primera es más corta.
For example, DNA defines your eye, skin, or even hair color before you born, but not only that kind of superficial stuff.
itIt also defines also our capability to learn, by improving the brain’s structures related with that matter, that lately, reverberate in our intelligence.
Genetic modifications also have the power to reduce down to zero all the illnesses we inherit from our parents and relatives down to zero.
Imagine, at last, to be able to end with ana disease whichthat haves been affecting your family though each generation.
Modifying a reproductive cell to improve their life expectativncies seems to be the holy grail of the health care to day, and we are nearer each time, but. However, it is not all is as good as it appears.
Separa a dos frases. La original es muy largo.
At first glance, thisese practices would returns a lot of profits to the humanity, but thereat bring with itselfs its own challenges.
"Humanity" usualmente no necesita "the."
"At first glance" es una cláusula introductoria, entonces necesita una coma.
For example, the older the people become, the greater is the difficult fory our economic system will have to look after them or theo assume the responsibility care them, but not onlyto take care of thatem.
La más corta (y suficiente) opción es, "For example, the older the people become, the more difficult it will be for our economic system to look after them."
"But not only that" es innecesario.
Today, any genetic intervention involves costs over millions of millions dollars, so who will be able to access this new technology?
Barriers in the access to this technology could create a society with more and more inequality each time.
La otra opción es, "Barriers in the access to this technology could create a more and more unequal society each time."
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Genetic modifications |
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Genetic modifications are one of the most revolutionary inventions occurred in our times. Genetic modifications are one of the most revolutionary inventions that has occurred in our times. |
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Unlike the sci fi movies you can see in the cinema, genetic modification today is not such a thing like creating new arms or making the people live eternally. Unlike the sci |
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It is more related with be able to identify those DNA chains that make us what we are, biologically speaking. It is more related También usted puede hablar, "It is more related with being able to identify," pero la primera es más corta. |
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For example, DNA define your eye, skin or even hair color before you born, but not only that kind of superficial stuff. For example, DNA defines your eye, skin, or even hair color before you born, but not only that kind of superficial stuff. |
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it defines also our capability to learn, by improving the brain’s structures related with that matter, that lately, reverberate in our intelligence.
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Genetic modifications also have the power to reduce down to zero all the illnesses we inherit from our parents and relatives. Genetic modifications also have the power to reduce |
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Image, at last, be able to end with an disease which have been affecting your family though each generation. Imagine, at last, to be able to end |
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Modifying a reproductive cell to improve their life expectatives seems to be the holy grail of the health care to day and we are nearer each time, but not all is as good as it appears. Modifying a reproductive cell to improve their life expecta Separa a dos frases. La original es muy largo. |
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At first glance this practices would returns a lot of profits to the humanity, but there bring with itself its own challenges. At first glance, th "Humanity" usualmente no necesita "the." "At first glance" es una cláusula introductoria, entonces necesita una coma. |
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For exampe, the older the people become, the greater is the difficult for our economic system to look after them or the assume the responsibility care them, but not only that. For example, the older the people become, the greater La más corta (y suficiente) opción es, "For example, the older the people become, the more difficult it will be for our economic system to look after them." "But not only that" es innecesario. |
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Today any genetic intervention involve costs over millions of millions dollars, so who will be able to access this new technology? Today, any genetic intervention involves costs over millions of millions dollars, so who will be able to access this new technology? |
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Barriers in the access to this technology could create a society more and more inequality each time. Barriers in the access to this technology could create a society with more and more inequality each time. La otra opción es, "Barriers in the access to this technology could create a more and more unequal society each time." |
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