Aug. 2, 2025
A writting practice
He was shoved off by the bearer of the curse. A vile act caused by a nobody. Not the White knight nor the whole honor of the house Valdimion, only a cruel man crushed by life itself, taking the spoils of the soldiers, gear and food too. The contender fall at his feet with no light in his eyes an letting out the last sigh he had in his lungs. So, he put on his gauntlets and limp towards the castle´s big door, ripped appart by the canonballs, leaving only its remains on fire.
Es sólo un texto que se me ocurrió con algunas palabras que aprendí de una canción. Me gustaría recibir correcciones de gramática y sugerencias de actividades para mejorar mi escritura
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A writting practice
A writing practice
Not the White knight nor the whole honor of the house Valdimion, only a cruel man crushed by life itself, taking the spoils of the soldiers, as well as their gear and food too.
Not the White knight nor the whole honor of the house Valdimion, only a cruel man crushed by life itself, taking the spoils of the soldiers as well as their gear and food.
The contender faell at his feet with no light in his eyes and he letting out the last sigh he had in his lungs.
The contender fell at his feet with no light in his eyes and he let out the last sigh he had in his lungs.
So, hHe put on his gauntlets and limped towards the castle´'s big door, ripped appart by the cannonballs,; leaving only its fiery remains on fire.
He put on his gauntlets and limped towards the castle's big door, ripped apart by the cannonballs; leaving only its fiery remains
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Amazing job! Really awesome use of vocabulary and storytelling - great English :)
Aug. 2, 2025
Thank you very much! I will continue practicing!
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A writting practice
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He was shoved off by the bearer of the curse. |
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A vile act caused by a nobody. |
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Not the White knight nor the whole honor of the house Valdimion, only a cruel man crushed by life itself, taking the spoils of the soldiers, gear and food too.
Not the White knight nor the whole honor of the house Valdimion, only a cruel man crushed by life itself, taking the spoils of the soldiers |
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The contender fall at his feet with no light in his eyes an letting out the last sigh he had in his lungs.
The contender f |
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So, he put on his gauntlets and limp towards the castle´s big door, ripped appart by the canonballs, leaving only its remains on fire.
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