Sept. 7, 2021
There are many gatherings with my friends and my coworkers.
I usually meet my friends when some events happen like wedding, 1st birthday of their child, and so on.
Before I got merried, I used to meet them twice a year.
But now, I spend almost every hour for my kids so it is very hard to make time to meet them now.
Next, there are staff-dinners with my coworkers.
Once a month, we had a regular staff-dinner for cheering team members.
Sometimes, two or three members who I consider them as friends have private gatherings.
I like this because there is no work pressure comparing with staff-dinners.
And we can easily arrange our schedule for the gathering.
But all of them are not possible these days by the COVID-19.
I hope the pandemic will come to an end soon.
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I hope the pandemic will come to an end soon.
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Gatherings
There are many gatherings with my friends and my coworkers.
I usually meet my friends when some events happen like wedding, 1st birthday of their childs, their children's birthdays, and so on.
Before I got mearried, I used to meet them twice a year.
But nNow, I spend almost every hour forwith my kids so it is very hard to make time to meet them now.
every free hour?
Next, there are staff-dinners with my coworkers.
Once a month, we had a regular staff-ve a dinner for cheering team members.
Not sure what you mean by "cheer"
Sometimes, two or three members who I consider them as friends have private gatherings.
I like this because there is no work pressure comparing, unlike with staff-dinners.
And we can easily arrange our schedule for the gathering.
But all of them are not possible these days by withe COVID-19.
I hope the pandemic will come to an end soon.
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There are many gathering with my friends and my coworkers. |
I usually meet my friends when some events happen like wedding, 1st birthday of their child, and so on. I usually meet my friends when some events happen like wedding I usually meet my friends "First birthday of their child" could mean when the child turns one years old (in Western culture children are born at 0 years old not one) or the day the mother gave birth to the child. If you mean the latter then this is probably fine, I don't think we really have much of a celebration when babies are born (usually baby showers come before I think, and I'm not counting religious ceremonies like baptisms or brises). |
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But now, I spend almost every hour for my kids so it is very hard to make time to meet them now.
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