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Gardening ans farming
Gardening and farming are important parts of life. In a garden, people grow fruits vegetables and plant for their family. In a farm, people work with animals and produce foods for other peoples. Taking care of plants need water, time and love. Farmers wake up early every day to feed animals and check the fields. Growing your own food but it feels amazing what you have grown yourself
Gardening ansd farming
Assuming that was a typo
In a garden, people grow fruits vegetables and plants for their family.
In a farm, people work with animals and produce foods for other peoples.
The words “food” and “people” do not gain an S when they become plural; they stay the same
Taking care of plants needtakes water, time and love.
This is a bit of a more complicated thing in English, but sometimes saying “takes” instead of “needs” sounds more natural. This is one of those instances where that applies.
Farmers wake up early every day to feed their animals and check their fields.
you should specify that these animals and fields belong to them
Growing your own food is hard, but it feels amazing what you have grown yourself.
This sentence is a bit confusing, but I’m assuming this is what you meant
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Good job! Mostly just some common errors with some rules (aka English being stupid), keep it up!
Gardening ansd farming
Gardening and farming are important parts of life.
In a garden, people grow fruits, vegetables and plants for their family.
In a farm, people work with animals and produce foods for other peoples.
Taking care of plants needrequires water, time and love.
Farmers wake up early every day to feed animals and check up on the fields.
Growing your own food (is hard?) but it feels amazing what you have grownto do it yourself
Gardening ansd farming
In a garden, people grow fruits, vegetables and plants for their family.
In a farm, people work with animals and produce foods for other peoples.
People itself means more than one person
Growing your own food but itmakes us feels amazing what you have grown yourself.
You have already established that you are growing your own food, second sentence is not needed.
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Very good writing. Keep it up.
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Gardening ans farming Gardening an Gardening an Gardening an Assuming that was a typo |
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Gardening and farming are important parts of life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In a garden, people grow fruits vegetables and plant for their family. In a garden, people grow fruits, vegetables and plants for their family. In a garden, people grow fruits, vegetables and plants for their family. In a garden, people grow fruits vegetables and plants for their family. |
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In a farm, people work with animals and produce foods for other peoples. In a farm, people work with animals and produce foods for other people People itself means more than one person In a farm, people work with animals and produce food In a farm, people work with animals and produce food The words “food” and “people” do not gain an S when they become plural; they stay the same |
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Taking care of plants need water, time and love. Taking care of plants Taking care of plants This is a bit of a more complicated thing in English, but sometimes saying “takes” instead of “needs” sounds more natural. This is one of those instances where that applies. |
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Farmers wake up early every day to feed animals and check the fields. Farmers wake up early every day to feed animals and check up on the fields. Farmers wake up early every day to feed their animals and check their fields. you should specify that these animals and fields belong to them |
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Growing your own food but it feels amazing what you have grown yourself Growing your own food You have already established that you are growing your own food, second sentence is not needed. Growing your own food (is hard?) but it feels amazing Growing your own food is hard, but it feels amazing This sentence is a bit confusing, but I’m assuming this is what you meant |
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