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For instance, in most Asian countries, parents do not allow their children to go traveling one year after high schooltake gap years.

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Others argue that the opposite is true.

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Only through experiencing real life by working or travelling, can students observe the things they truly love.

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Usually, most students choose their majors since their parents forced them to.

forced → told
might also be okay depending on what you want to say

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are able to → are better able to
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A case ofCase in point, students have opportunities to travel to more than one place, so they explore different cultures, histories, and even makinge friends with people who are from all over the world.

They leargain knowledge from these which aids them to become a person with distinctivea greater perspective of things.

Thus, they are able to stand out in their professional field.

Of course, some people might say that it is essential tofor students to attend to colleges straight away, since they have toshould study continually instead of wasting time to travel or work.

For instance, in most Asian countries, parents do not allow their children to go traveling one year after graduating high school.

graduating is optional

travelling(UK) traveling(US)

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The original sentence

Likewise, I am more in favor of students shouldof haveing at least one year to work or travel before going to colleges.

favour(UK) favor(US)

It eithercould helps them develop both their interests orand enriches their life- experiences.

either makes it sound like a one or another thing and never both at the same time

Hence, providing students a chance to work or travel before attending colleges straight away, it will definitely benefit to their lifeves after all.