Oct. 6, 2025
After entering the Promised Land, the Israelites repeatedly disobeyed God.
God allowed the Philistines to rule over them for forty years.
Forty years later, a man named Samson came to save them.
Before Samson was born, an angel appeared to his mother and said that she would give birth to a son.
She had to promise to God that she must never drink alcohol.
Her son Samson had to promise never to shave his head.
God made Samson incredibly powerful.
One day, he killed a lion without any weapons.
Samson fell in love with a Philistine woman named Delilah.
The leaders of the Philistines asked Delilah to find out the reason why Samson was so powerful.
At first he deceived Delilah and did not tell her the secret of his great power.
Delilah asked every day, making Samson irritated, so he just told the secret of his hair to Delilah.
While he was asleep, Delilah shaved his hair.
Then the Spirit of God left Samson, and so did his great power.
The Philistine enemies came and captured Samson easily.
In English, Delilah refers to an unfaithful woman or betrayal.
进入应许地后,以色列人一次又一次地违背神。
神让非利士人统治了他们四十年。
四十年后,一个叫参孙的人来解救他们。
参孙出生前,一位天使向他母亲显现,说她将生一个儿子。
她必须遵守对神的诺言:绝不可以喝酒。
她的儿子参孙必须遵守一个约定:绝不剃头发。
神使参孙力大无比。
有一天,手无寸铁的他竟然杀死了一只狮子。
参孙爱上了一个非利士女人,名叫大利拉。
非利士人的首领要求大利拉查出参孙力大无穷的原因。
参孙起初骗了大利拉,没有说出他力大无穷的秘密。
大利拉天天问,参孙终于不耐烦了,就把他头发的秘密告诉了大利拉。
大利拉趁他睡着的时候,剃了他的头发。
于是,神的灵离开了参孙,力量也离开了他。
敌人非利士人来了,轻易地捉住了参孙。
大利拉在英语里指的是不忠实的女人、背叛。
The story of Samson and Delilah
After entering the Promised Land, the Israelites repeatedly disobeyed God.
God allowed the Philistines to rule over them for forty years.
Forty years later, a man named Samson came to save them.
Before Samson was born, an angel appeared to his mother and said that she would give birth to a son.
She had to promise to God that she mustwould never drink alcohol.
Her son Samson had to promise never to shave his head.
God made Samson incredibly powerful.
You could add "in return" to the start of this sentence to link it to the previous sentences, ie. God made them swear these things and in return, God made Samson incredibly powerful.
One day, he killed a lion without any weapons.
Samson fell in love with a Philistine woman named Delilah.
It could be worthwhile to add a clarifier to the start of this sentence to set it apart from the previous sentence, eg. later, some time later, some years later (after he killed the lion), to clarify that the paragraph is moving on to a different point/topic now.
The leaders of the Philistines asked Delilah to find out the reason why Samson was so powerful.
At first he deceived Delilah and did not tell her the secret of his great power.
Delilah asked every day, making Samson irritated, so he just told the secret of his hair to Delilah.
While he was asleep, Delilah shaved his hair.
Then the Spirit of God left Samson, and so did his great power.
The Philistine enemies came and captured Samson easily.
In English, Delilah refers to an unfaithful woman or betrayal.
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Well-written, and also very interesting as I'd never heard the full story before now!
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After entering the Promised Land, the Israelites repeatedly disobeyed God. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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God allowed the Philistines to rule over them for forty years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Forty years later, a man named Samson came to save them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before Samson was born, an angel appeared to his mother and said that she would give birth to a son. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She had to promise to God that she must never drink alcohol. She had to promise to God that she |
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Her son Samson had to promise never to shave his head. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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God made Samson incredibly powerful. God made Samson incredibly powerful. You could add "in return" to the start of this sentence to link it to the previous sentences, ie. God made them swear these things and in return, God made Samson incredibly powerful. |
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One day, he killed a lion without any weapons. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Samson fell in love with a Philistine woman named Delilah. Samson fell in love with a Philistine woman named Delilah. It could be worthwhile to add a clarifier to the start of this sentence to set it apart from the previous sentence, eg. later, some time later, some years later (after he killed the lion), to clarify that the paragraph is moving on to a different point/topic now. |
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The leaders of the Philistines asked Delilah to find out the reason why Samson was so powerful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At first he deceived Delilah and did not tell her the secret of his great power. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Delilah asked every day, making Samson irritated, so he just told the secret of his hair to Delilah. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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While he was asleep, Delilah shaved his hair. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then the Spirit of God left Samson, and so did his great power. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The Philistine enemies came and captured Samson easily. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In English, Delilah refers to an unfaithful woman or betrayal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Delilah asked every day, so that Samson finally impatient, just told the secret of his hair to Delilah. |
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The enemy Philistines came and captured Samson easily. |
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Delilah in English refers to an unfaithful woman and betrayal. |
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She must keep her promise to God that she must never drink alcohol. |
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Her son Samson had to keep a promise never to shave his head. |
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