Dec. 4, 2025
The Second Video from My iPhone's Storage
I just uploaded the second video from my iPhone's storage. You're welcome to watch it: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/CFxoirJItiY
It's a little bit late, and I'm really tired. So I'll make this entry short.
Please be my English teacher, telling me all the points that I need to do better in the dubbing!
Thanks in advance!
Oh, please ignore my weird flu voice.
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The Second Video from My iPhone's Storage
I just uploaded the second video from my iPhone's storage.
也可能: You're welcome to watch it: at https://www.youtube.com/shorts/CFxoirJItiY
也可能: You're welcome to watch it at https://www.youtube.com/shorts/CFxoirJItiY
It's a little bit late, and I'm really tired.
S建议：将两句话合并为一句，如下所示：It's a little bit late and I'm really tired, so I'll make this entry short.
建议：将两句话合并为一句，如下所示：It's a little bit late and I'm really tired, so I'll make this entry short.
Thanks in advance for watching the video and your comments! Thanks in advance for watching the video and your comments!
Oh, please ignore my weird flu voice.
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Nice video! Very natural. Here is my most recent video:
https://www.tnewfields.info/BlueEarth/Video/Newfields-unrav.mp4
Dec. 5, 2025
谢谢！
Wow, it's so poetic! Just like your previous entries.
The Second Video from My iPhone's Storage
I just uploaded the second video from my iPhone's storage.
You're welcome to watch it: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/CFxoirJItiY
It's a little bit late, and I'm really tired.
So I'll make this entry short.
Please be my English teacher, and telling me all the pothintgs that I need to do better in theimprove my dubbing!
Please be my English teacher and tell me all the things that I need to improve my dubbing!
Thanks in advance!
Oh, please ignore my weird flu voice.
Dec. 5, 2025
Thanks a lot!
Have a nice day!
The Second Video from My iPhone's Storage
I just uploaded the second video from my iPhone's storage.
You're welcome to watch it: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/CFxoirJItiY
It's a little bit late, and I'm really tired., so…
It's a little bit late, and I'm really tired, so…
S…so I'll make this entry short.
…so I'll make this entry short.
Merge this with the previous sentence.
Please be my English teacher, telling me all the {points where | things that} I need to do better in the dubbing! Please be my English teacher, telling me all the {points where | things that} I need to do better in the dubbing!
Thanks in advance!
Oh, please ignore my weird flu voice.
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I’m sorry you’re sick and hope you get well soon!
I love your video and the dubbing is great, but since you specifically requested feedback, I’ll offer a couple points: 🙂
• Terrace: The usage of this term probably differs from region to region. For me, a terrace at a hotel is a large, flat outdoor area that’s accessible from the public areas of the hotel. A smaller version that is only accessible from an individual room is usually (in my experience) called a balcony, especially if it’s elevated above the ground level.
• “scenery became gentle” – “gentle” seems odd here. My suggestion: “the colors of the surrounding scenery softened.”
These were the only two things that I noticed.
The gorgeous sunset view was a nice surprise at the end of the video. I watched it several times so I could pause at that point and take it in. Even the power pylons in the background look beautiful in that light! I’ll rewatch this video on my TV tonight so I can enjoy it on a bigger screen.
Dec. 5, 2025
谢谢！
I thought about choosing "terrace" or "balcony". That one is quite big, bigger than the balcony in my mind, so I used terrance.
Thank you for letting me know the difference.
Have a nice day!
I just uploaded the second video from my iPhone's storage.
I just uploaded the second video from my iPhone storage.
Think you can just say iPhone storage. I don't really say iPhone's storage, although both are ok grammatically.
It's a little bit late, and I'm really tired, so I'll make this entry short.
It's a little bit late and I'm really tired, so I'll make this entry short.
You can combine the sentences to make it a bit more natural!
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你的英文真的好！视频里你说：“Sunset was there just beside us" 可能 ”just in front of us“ 比较好。"Beside" sounds like the sun is very close to you, e.g. the bird was right beside me, I would imagine it is maybe 1 metre from you. But the sun is quite far, although you can see it very clearly. Sorry I tried to practice my chinese and gave up halfway hahahahah.
Dec. 5, 2025
谢谢！
你的中文表达得不错，欢迎继续联系呀！
Have a nice day!
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