Aug. 1, 2021
Diary
I've been feeling bad lately. Whatever it is now fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes. I spend a lot of time in front of the computer, but I have absolutely no idea what to write about. I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all. Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3 times. This is not a good start. Moreover, the process of drafting the writing took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.
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Whatever it is now fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes.
I spend a lot of time in front of the computer, but I have absolutely no idea what to write about.
I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing want to bring up are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all.
I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I want to bring up are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all.
Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3 times.
This is not a good start.
Moreover, the process of drafwriting the writingdraft took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.
Moreover, the process of writing the draft took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.
sometimes we call drafting the writing a "rough draft" or just a "draft". you could also just say "drafting took too long".
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Great journal, your thoughts came out clearly. I hope your classes gets easier for you and you accomplish your goals. keep going
Aug. 3, 2021
Thanks :)
Diary
I've been feeling bad lately.
Whatever it is now fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes.
I spend a lot of time in front of the computer, but I have absolutely no idea what to write about.
I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing are too ambitious and. I have no control over them at all.
I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing are too ambitious. I have no control over them at all.
I split up the sentence because it was a bit long. Not sure what you mean by "I have no control over them at all." Is it that you don't have the knowledge to write about the topics? Or that you feel like you can't stop yourself from taking on overly ambitious tasks?
Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3three times.
Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in three times.
Technically, you should write out 1-9 and use numerals for 10+. But native speakers get this wrong (or ignore the rule) all the time.
This is not a good start.
Moreover, the process of drafting the writing took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.
Aug. 3, 2021
Thanks :)
Diary
I've been feeling bad lately.
Whatever it is, now it fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes. Whatever it is, now it fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes.
I spend a lot of time in front of the computer, but I have absolutely no idea what to write about.
I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framingd like to write about are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all.
I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'd like to write about are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all.
Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3 times.
This is not a good start.
Moreover, the process of drafting the writing took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.
Feedback
I get this feeling all the time! What works for me, is writing a first draft that's not so good and then improving it later. Good luck!
Aug. 2, 2021
I feel you, this is me every day I sit in front of my computer to write an entry for langcorrect, staring at a blank page completely no idea what to write about...
Aug. 3, 2021
I feel you, this is me every day I sit in front of my computer to write an entry for langcorrect, staring at a blank page completely no idea what to write about...
Thank you for your reply and corrections!
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I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all.
I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'
I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing are too ambitious I split up the sentence because it was a bit long. Not sure what you mean by "I have no control over them at all." Is it that you don't have the knowledge to write about the topics? Or that you feel like you can't stop yourself from taking on overly ambitious tasks?
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Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3 times. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in Technically, you should write out 1-9 and use numerals for 10+. But native speakers get this wrong (or ignore the rule) all the time. |
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