July 13, 2023
2023/07/12 #5 廣東話日記
今日我返咗五個鐘工。因為星期一我打咗壘球好耐，今日我身體好痛。夜晚我睇電視睇下籃球賽。一隊係西雅圖嚟嘅，另一隊係華盛頓嚟嘅。最後係華盛頓嗰隊贏咗
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2023/07/12 #5 廣東話日記
今日我返咗五個鐘工。
因為星期一我打咗壘球好耐，今日我身體好痛。
夜晚我睇電視，睇下籃球賽。 夜晚我睇電視，睇下籃球賽。
一隊係西雅圖嚟嘅，另一隊係華盛頓嚟嘅。
一隊係西雅圖，另一隊係華盛頓。
you're not wrong, but it sounds a bit "pretentious" if you add 嚟嘅 at the end, sounds less natural to locals.
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Almost perfect, incredible writing.
July 13, 2023
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今日我返咗五個鐘工。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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因為星期一我打咗壘球好耐，今日我身體好痛。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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夜晚我睇電視睇下籃球賽。 夜晚我睇電視，睇下籃球賽。 夜晚我睇電視，睇下籃球賽。 |
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一隊係西雅圖嚟嘅，另一隊係華盛頓嚟嘅。
一隊係西雅圖 you're not wrong, but it sounds a bit "pretentious" if you add 嚟嘅 at the end, sounds less natural to locals. |
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最後係華盛頓嗰隊贏咗 |
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