I went to my dream place I went to my dream place

I wWent to my dDream pPlace I Went to my Dream Place

I went to my dream place I went to my dream place

Finally, I couldmanaged to go to the One Piece shop! Finally, I managed to go to the One Piece shop!

I'm a big fan of One Piece so that only shop makes me feel comfy. I'm a big fan of One Piece so that shop makes me feel comfy.

"comfy" is ok here, but you should know that it is very informal. It is used to shorten the word "comfortable" when typing on the internet or messaging friends, or, when spoken, to act cute with friends.

I'm a big fan of One Piece, so that only shop makes me feel comfy/at home. I'm a big fan of One Piece, so that shop makes me feel comfy/at home.

I'm a big fan of One Piece, so that onlyonly that shop makes me feel comfy. I'm a big fan of One Piece, so only that shop makes me feel comfy.

I'm a big fan of One Piece so that is the only shop that makes me feel comfyortable. I'm a big fan of One Piece so that is the only shop that makes me feel comfortable.

I put some of them on my laptop and ithey makes it look pretty! I put some of them on my laptop and they make it look pretty!

I put some of them on my laptop and it makes pretty. Now my laptop looks amazing with all these stickers! I put some of them on my laptop. Now my laptop looks amazing with all these stickers!

I put some of them on my laptop and it makesde it pretty! I put some of them on my laptop and it made it pretty!

“put” is in past tense, so “make” should also be past tense. It becomes “made”

I put some of them on my laptop and ithey makes my laptop look pretty! I put some of them on my laptop and they make my laptop look pretty!

I put some of themse on my laptop and it makes, pretty! I put some of these on my laptop, pretty!

There is a campaign through which you can get a postcard if you purchase over 2,000 yen fromduring New Year but I misunderstood that Iit and thought it's had already started. There is a campaign through which you can get a postcard if you purchase over 2,000 yen during New Year but I misunderstood it and thought it had already started.

There is a campaign in which you can get a postcard if you purchase over 2,000 yen from New Year but. Unfortunately, I misunderstood that because I thought it'the campaign has already started. There is a campaign in which you can get a postcard if you purchase over 2,000 yen from New Year. Unfortunately, I misunderstood that because I thought the campaign has already started.

There is a campaign in which you can get a postcard if you purchasespend over 2,000 yen fromafter New Years, but I misunderstood that Iand thought it's had already started. There is a campaign in which you can get a postcard if you spend over 2,000 yen after New Years, but I misunderstood and thought it had already started.

There is a campaign in which you can get a postcard if you purchase over 2,000 yen, starting from New Year, but I misunderstood that Iit and thought it'sthat it had already started. There is a campaign in which you can get a postcard if you purchase over 2,000 yen, starting from New Year, but I misunderstood it and thought that it had already started.

There is a campaign which you can get a postcard if you purchase over 2,000 yen from New Year but I misunderstood that I thought it'stakenly thought that it had already started.begun. There is a campaign which you can get a postcard if you purchase over 2,000 yen from New Year but I mistakenly thought that it had already begun.

Maybe I will go there again after the nNew yYear. Maybe I will go there again after the New Year.

Maybe I will go there again after the nNew yYear. Maybe I will go there again after the New Year.

Just keeping it consistent since you have "New Year" capitalized above.

MQuite sad! But maybe, I will go there again after the new year. Quite sad! But maybe, I will go there again after the new year.