March 3, 2021
Story idea that I was working on.
The world's changed when the cure for death was found. The simple villages have turned into amazing cities, the magic and tech have been so closer, and everything seems like a fairy tale. Just as in a fairy tale, something needs to get in the way to make a good story. In this story, it is life.
In a world where nobody dies, I must die.
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SA story idea that I was working on.
A story idea that I was working on.
The world's changed when the cure for death was found.
The world changed when the cure for death was found.
The simple villages have turned into amazing cities, the magic and tech have been sobrought closer, and everything seems like a fairy tale.
The simple villages turned into amazing cities, magic and tech have been brought closer, and everything seems like a fairy tale.
Just asBut just like in a fairy tale, something needs to get in the way to make a good story.
But just like in a fairy tale, something needs to get in the way to make a good story.
In this story, it is life.
In a world where nobody dies, I must die.
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Awesome idea, I am excited to read more!
March 3, 2021
Thank you :D
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The world's changed when the cure for death was found.
The world |
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Story idea that I was working on.
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The simple villages have turned into amazing cities, the magic and tech have been so closer, and everything seems like a fairy tale.
The simple villages |
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Just as in a fairy tale, something needs to get in the way to make a good story.
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In this story, it is life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In a world where nobody dies, I must die. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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