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“Bonsoir, comi tali vou?” dite Kat. “Bonne,” dite Olivia.


“Hello, how are you?” said Kat. “Good”, said Olivia.

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“Bonsoir, comi tali vou?” dite Kat.


« Bonsoir, comi tali vou?” ditment allez-vous ? », demande Kat. « Bonsoir, comment allez-vous ? », demande Kat.

How = comment "To be" in "how are you?" is translated by the verb "aller" You = vous French quotation marks = « » Better to use "demander" ("ask") here

“Bonsoir, comi tali ment allez-vous?” dite Kat. “Bonsoir, comment allez-vous?” dit Kat.

“Bonne,” dite Olivia.


“Bonne,” dite« Bien », dit/répond Olivia. « Bien », dit/répond Olivia.

"Bon" is an adjective, "bien" is an adverb (modifying the verb "aller")

“Bonneien,” dite Olivia. “Bien,” dit Olivia.

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