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I have relocated to B city from A city for 4 months now. I am excited and scared at the same time. Mostly I am worried about the language --- English. I am OK to hold a basic and short conversation. But when it comes to a longer conversation, regarding describing concepts, summarises key points. I find it difficult for me to express them in a logical and clear way. I definitely think writing more could improve my expression ability.

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I am excited and scared at the same time.

Mostly I am worried about the language --- English.

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Silio

Feb. 6, 2023

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Mostly I am worried about the language --- English.

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Silio

Feb. 6, 2023

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I have relocated to B city B from A city A for 4 months now.

This means you will stay in city B for just four months and then move again. Is this what you mean? Or do you mean you relocated to city B four months ago?

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Feb. 6, 2023

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I am excited and scared at the same time.

Mostly I am worried about the language --- English.

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Silio

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I have relocated to B city from A city for 4 months now.


I have relocated to B cCity B from A cCity forA 4 months nowago. I relocated to City B from City A 4 months ago.

* When using placeholders we tend to use the noun first (e.g. Food A vs Food B) * We don't tend to use 'relocated' as a state

I have relocated to B city B from A city A for 4 months now. I have relocated to city B from city A for 4 months now.

This means you will stay in city B for just four months and then move again. Is this what you mean? Or do you mean you relocated to city B four months ago?

I have relocated to B city from A city four 4 months nowago. I relocated to B city from A city four months ago.

I am excited and scared at the same time.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Mostly I am worried about the language --- English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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I am OK to hold a basic and short conversation.


I am OKgood enough to hold a basic and short conversation. I am good enough to hold a basic and short conversation.

I am OK to hold a basic and short conversation. I am OK to hold a basic and short conversation.

This is fine in casual speech.

I am OK to holding a basic and short conversation. I am OK holding a basic and short conversation.

But when it comes to a longer conversation, regarding describing concepts, summarises key points.


But when it comes to a longer conversation, regarding with describing concepts, and summarisesing key points. But when it comes to a longer conversation with describing concepts and summarising key points

This sentence isn't a complete idea - so it needs to be merged with the next one.

But when it comes to a longer conversation, regarincluding describing concepts, or summariseszing key points., I find… But when it comes to a longer conversation, including describing concepts or summarizing key points, I find…

Merge this incomplete sentence with the next.

But when it comes to a longer conversation, regarding describing concepts, summarises key points.

This is a sentence fragment so I deleted it and added it to the next line.

I find it difficult for me to express them in a logical and clear way.


I find it difficult for me to express themmyself in a logical and clear way. I find it difficult to express myself in a logical and clear way.

(note above comment - it should read: "But when it comes to a longer conversation with describing concepts and summarising key points, I find it difficult to express myself in a logical and clear way.)

I find it difficult (for me) to express them in a logical and clear way. I find it difficult (for me) to express them in a logical and clear way.

It will sound more natural if you delete “for me.” Suggestion: But when it comes to a longer conversation, I find it difficult to describe concepts or summarize key points logically and clearly.

But when it comes to a longer conversation, which includes describing concepts and summarizing key points, I find it difficult for me to express them in a logical and clear way. But when it comes to a longer conversation, which includes describing concepts and summarizing key points, I find it difficult for me to express them in a logical and clear way.

We all do at first. You'll get there with more practice.

I definitely think writing more could improve my expression ability.


I definitely think writing more could improve my expression abilityability to express myself. I definitely think writing more could improve my ability to express myself.

I definitely think writing more could improve my expression abilityability to express myself. I definitely think writing more could improve my ability to express myself.

I definitely think writing more could improve my expression abilityability to express myself. I definitely think writing more could improve my ability to express myself.

Definitely!

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