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Friends

From my perspective, friends can have an effect on your lifestyle and attitude. Honestly, they play a critical role same as family. In my experience, friends are your relatives chosen by yourself. Additionally, good friends offer valuable suggestions when we feel lost. Any problems you find difficult to talk to parents, you are able to share with them. Besides, they accompany our lives through ups and downs.
As you grow older, friendship becomes based on benefits & advantages. Children's friendship is rather pure. However, adults choose more cautiously. Adults prefer those who have the same idea, jobs, and goals in life.
The way I think, the most important values in friends are honesty and loyalty. They must be a reliable person. Additionally, they share in our happiness and sorrow. Whenever you need them, they will be there. However, everyone has flaws. Consequently, these people are called real friends.
There are plenty of ways to make new friends. Besides, being colleagues, classmates, and roommates, you can also make new friendships through friends. Because often you are sharing the same ideas. Also, you can make online Friends. For introverted people it’s best, however, trusting new people you don’t know is a little bit tough.
I socialize with my friend on a daily basics. You know, maintaining relation much harder than making a new one. We have video calls or chat over the internet. Additionally, we have chilled out every Friday for 5 years.


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Consequently, these people are called real friends.

There are plenty of ways to make new friends.

Whenever you need them they will be there.

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March 3, 2022

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Friends

Besides, they play a vital role in your life.

It means they are part of your life.

Additionally, good friends offer valuable suggestions when we feel lost.

It shows they play a critical role same as family.

However, adults choose more cautiously.

It proves how they are important and effective.

It means making new friends through other friends.

Consequently, these people are called real friends.

There are plenty of ways to make new friends.

I’m not judging nonetheless this world is the fake one.

However, I don’t like flatter ones.

Despite giving a lot of motivation, they act as a mirror and show defects.

Whenever you need them they will be there.

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Whenever you need them, they will be there.


It means they are part of your life.


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It means they are part of your life. It means they are part of your life.

I would remove this sentence. It's grammatically correct, but it's duplicative.

Children's friendship is pure, breaking easily and makeup again.


Children's friendship is pure, breaking easily and makeing up again. Children's friendship is pure, breaking easily and making up again.

Children's friendship is pure, breaking easily and makeup againFriendship amongst children is pure, starting and ending freely. Friendship amongst children is pure, starting and ending freely.

Friends


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From where I stand, the family can affect your life.


From where I stand, the family can affect your life. From where I stand, family can affect your life.

From where I stand, themy point of view, your family can affects your entire life. From my point of view, your family affects your entire life.

Besides, they play a vital role in your life.


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Besides, tThey play a vital role in your life. They play a vital role.

"Besides" is very casual and is used to elaborate a point.

Moreover, we have spent thousand days in each other arms.


Moreover, we have spent thousands of days in each other arms. Moreover, we have spent thousands of days in each other arms.

or “a thousand days”.

Moreover, wWe have spent thousand dayyears in each other arms. We have spent years in each other arms.

Consequently, they have a huge impact on the course of life.


Consequently, they have a huge impact on the course of lifeour lives. Consequently, they have a huge impact on the course of our lives.

ConsequentNaturally, they have a huge impact on the course of your life. Naturally, they have a huge impact on the course of your life.

From my perspective, friends can be effective your lifestyle and attitude to life.


From my perspective, friends can behave an effective on your lifestyle and attitude to life. From my perspective, friends can have an effect on your lifestyle and attitude to life.

From my perspective, friends can be effectivealso impact your lifestyle and attitude towards life. From my perspective, friends can also impact your lifestyle and attitude towards life.

There is a key sentence from the famous psychologist who said: purchase good friends for your children.


There is a key sentence from the famous psychologist who said: purchase good friends for your children. There is a key sentence from the famous psychologist who said: purchase good friends for your children.

I’m not familiar with the original quote, but is “purchase” what you mean to say here? “Provide” might work better, because it doesn’t imply you’re buying people.

There is a key sentencpoignant quote from the famous psychologist who said: phelp your chasildren make good friends for your children. There is a poignant quote from the famous psychologist who said: help your children make good friends.

It shows they play a critical role same as family.


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It shows they play a critical role, the same as family. It shows they play a critical role, the same as family.

Additionally, good friends offer valuable suggestions when we feel lost.


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Additionally, good friends offer valuable suggestionshelpful advice when we feel lost. Additionally, good friends offer helpful advice when we feel lost.

Any problems you find it difficult to talk to parents, you be able to share with them.


Any problems you find it difficult to talk to parents about, you bare able to share with them. Any problems you find difficult to talk to parents about, you are able to share with them.

Any problemsWhen you find it difficult to talk to parents, you be able to about your problems, you can share with them. When you find it difficult to talk to parents about your problems, you can share with them.

Besides, they accompany our lives.


Besides, they accompany us throughout our lives. Besides, they accompany us throughout our lives.

You accompany a person, not a life.

Besides, they accompany ourus over our entire lives. Besides, they accompany us over our entire lives.

It proves how they are important and effective.


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It proves how they are important and effectivshows us how important and impactful they are. It shows us how important and impactful they are.

There are plenty of ways to make new friends.


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Besides, being colleagues, classmates, and roommates, making new friendships with your friend's friends.


Besides, being colleagues, classmates, and roommates, makingyou can also make new friendships with your friend's friends. Besides being colleagues, classmates, and roommates, you can also make new friendships with your friend's friends.

You need a little phrase follow on from the “besides”.

Besides,For example, by being colleagues, classmates, and roommates, making new friendships withor by meeting your friend's friends. For example, by being colleagues, classmates, and roommates, or by meeting your friend's friends.

It means making new friends through other friends.


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It means making new friends through other friends. It means making new friends through other friends.

Correct, but duplicative.

I’m much experienced in this way.


I’m much experienced in this way. I’m much experienced in this.

I’m much experienced in this wayThis is often how I've made friends. This is often how I've made friends.

it’s mostly a shortcut one to finding new friends because often you are sharing the same ideas.


iIt’s mostly a shortcut one to finding new friends because you often you are sharinge the same ideas. It’s mostly a shortcut to finding new friends because you often share the same ideas.

“Sharing” would mean talking about, whereas “share” just means you have the same ideas whether you talk about them or not, which I think is what you mean here.

it’s mostly aIt's shortcut one to finding new friends because often you areyou usually already sharinge the same ideavalues. It's shortcut one to finding new friends because you usually already share the same values.

If it doesn’t answer, you can try online.


If ithat doesn’t answerhelp, you can try online. If that doesn’t help, you can try online.

Or maybe “if that isn’t the answer” or “if that doesn’t get any results”.

If ithat doesn't answerwork, you can try online. If that doesn't work, you can try online.

For introverted people it’s best, however, nowadays trusting new people you don’t know is a little bit tough.


For introverted people it’s best [to do something], however, since nowadays trusting new people you don’t know is a little bit tough. For introverted people it’s best [to do something], however, since nowadays trusting new people you don’t know is a little bit tough.

This sentence seems to be missing some information. What is it best for introverted people to do? Or do you mean it’s best for them to look for friends online? The ”however” makes it seems like introverted people shouldn’t look online.

For introverted people it’s the best, however, nowadays trusting new people you don’t know is a little bit tough. For introverted people it’s the best, however, nowadays trusting new people you don’t know is a little bit tough.

I’m not judging nonetheless this world is the fake one.


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I’m not judging but nonetheless this world is thebut there are a lot of fakes oneut in the world. I’m not judging but nonetheless but there are a lot of fakes out in the world.

As you grow older, friendship became based on benefit.


As you grow older, friendships becaome based on benefit. As you grow older, friendships become based on benefit.

As you grow older, friendship becaomes based on mutual benefit. As you grow older, friendship becomes based on mutual benefit.

They didn’t look up any properties in humans.


They didn’t look up any properties in humans. They didn’t look up any properties in humans.

Not sure what you’re trying to say with this one.

They didn’t look up any properties in humanare not judging and nor evaluating potential friends by their merits or accomplishments. They are not judging and nor evaluating potential friends by their merits or accomplishments.

However, adults choose more cautiously.


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Adults prefer those who have the same idea, job, and goals in life.


Adults prefer those who have the same ideas, job, and goals in life. Adults prefer those who have the same ideas, job, and goals in life.

Adults prefer those who have the same ideaology, jobs, and goals in life. Adults prefer those who have the same ideology, jobs, and goals in life.

for the example having the same music taste or same movie Genre.


fFor the example having the same music taste or same movie Genrliking the same genre of movie. For the example having the same music taste or liking the same genre of movie.

for theLike, for example, having the same music taste or same movie Genretaste in music or movies. Like, for example, having the same taste in music or movies.

Nonetheless, I look up to humans for friendship who have the same hating point.


Nonetheless, I look up to humans for friendship who have the same hating point. Nonetheless, I look up to humans for friendship who have the same hating point.

I don’t understand this either, sorry!

Nonetheless, I look up to humans for friendship with people who have the same (hating point). Nonetheless, I look for friendship with people who have the same (hating point).

Hating point? Not sure what you mean.

The way I think, the most important values for making friendship are honesty and loyalty.


The way I think, the most important values for makingin a friendship are honesty and loyalty. The way I think, the most important values in a friend are honesty and loyalty.

The way I thinkIn my opinion, the most important values for making friendship are honesty and loyalty. In my opinion, the most important values for friendship are honesty and loyalty.

However, I don’t like flatter ones.


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However, I don’t like flatter onespeople. However, I don’t like flatter people.

Besides, judgemental person is an unmotivated one.


Besides, a judgemental person is an unmotivated persone. Besides, a judgmental person is an unmotivated person.

Besides, a judgemental person is an unmotivated one. Besides, a judgemental person is an unmotivated one.

Despite giving a lot of motivation, they act as a mirror and show defects.


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Despite givshowing a lot of motivationenthusiasm(?), they act as a mirror and show defects. Despite showing a lot of enthusiasm(?), they act as a mirror and show defects.

"Defects" is usually a word used for things like cars or electronics.

Whenever you need them they will be there.


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Moreover, share happiness and sorrow.


Moreover, sharethey share in our happiness and sorrow. Moreover, they share in our happiness and sorrow.

Moreover, shareThey will be there in both happiness and sorrow. They will be there in both happiness and sorrow.

Consequently, these people are called real friends.


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They must be a reliable person.


Additionally, they share in our happiness and sorrow.


From my perspective, friends can have an effect on your lifestyle and attitude.


Honestly, they play a critical role same as family.


In my experience, friends are your relatives chosen by yourself.


Any problems you find difficult to talk to parents, you are able to share with them.


Besides, they accompany our lives through ups and downs.


As you grow older, friendship becomes based on benefits & advantages.


Children's friendship is rather pure.


Adults prefer those who have the same idea, jobs, and goals in life.


The way I think, the most important values in friends are honesty and loyalty.


However, everyone has flaws.


Besides, being colleagues, classmates, and roommates, you can also make new friendships through friends.


Because often you are sharing the same ideas.


Also, you can make online Friends.


For introverted people it’s best, however, trusting new people you don’t know is a little bit tough.


I socialize with my friend on a daily basics.


You know, maintaining relation much harder than making a new one.


We have video calls or chat over the internet.


Additionally, we have chilled out every Friday for 5 years.


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