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A meaningful experience that changed the way I think

A meaningful experience that changed the way I think is go abroad to live. When I was twenties, I thought that I had lived in my hometown for my whole life which there are my family, my friends, my everything. Over time, I realized that I wasn't happy with it. It wasn't my place that I belonged to. Therefore, I decided to go far away from there and figured out where my place was. I made the first trip to go abroad in my life and it totally changed my life ever. I've had the chance to meet and work with different people. Every person I met give me a specific lesson and experience that were valuable for me. One thing I've learned to patience is important. I might not the best person to do everything but I'm more patient to do it again and again and again until I get used to it and master in it. What surprised me in this progress is how difficult it was but after that I knew that how much I enjoyed it. The result wasn't the most important but the progress was beautiful. I used to be shy and be scared to do everything but now I'm more confident. One sentence I really love is "If you're too scared, do it scared!". I'm proud of myself because I was so brave to get out of my comfort zone and becoming the person I admired. Overall, I feel that it was a valuable experience and it helped me change my mindset and I know that I've grown a lot.

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A meaningful experience that changed the way I think

Over time, I realized that I wasn't happy with it.

Therefore, I decided to go far away from there and figured out where my place was.

I've had the chance to meet and work with different people.

One sentence I really love is "If you're too scared, do it scared!".

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A meaningful experience that changed the way I think


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A meaningful experience that changed the way I think is go abroad to live.


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When you're introducing a *specific* case, often we say "one", instead of "a". e.g: "One fine morning, I woke up to find my car gone." "One book which has helped me mentally was The Lord of the Rings"

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When I was twenties, I thought that I had lived in my hometown for my whole life which there are my family, my friends, my everything.


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Over time, I realized that I wasn't happy with it.


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It wasn't my place that I belonged to.


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"It wasn't a place where I belonged" also works In this expression which means "fitting in", "to" isn't needed.

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It would be more natural to say "I didn't feel like I belonged there"

Therefore, I decided to go far away from there and figured out where my place was.


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Therefore, I decided to go far away from there and figured out where my place was. Therefore, I decided to go far away and figure out where my place was.

I made the first trip to go abroad in my life and it totally changed my life ever.


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I've had the chance to meet and work with different people.


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Every person I met give me a specific lesson and experience that were valuable for me.


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One thing I've learned to patience is important.


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I might not the best person to do everything but I'm more patient to do it again and again and again until I get used to it and master in it.


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What surprised me in this progress is how difficult it was but after that I knew that how much I enjoyed it.


What surprised me in this progress is how difficult it was, but after that, I knew that how much I enjoyed it. What surprised me in this progress is how difficult it was, but after that, I knew that how much I enjoyed it.

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This is awkwardly phrased...you could say something like, "I was surprised how difficult the process was, but in the end, I enjoyed it"

The result wasn't the most important but the progress was beautiful.


The result wasn't the most important thing, but the progress was beautiful. The result wasn't the most important thing, but the progress was beautiful.

The result wasn't the most important thing, but the progress was beautiful. The result wasn't the most important thing, but the progress was beautiful.

I used to be shy and be scared to do everything but now I'm more confident.


I used to be shy and be scared to do everything but now I'm more confident. I used to be shy and scared to do everything but now I'm more confident.

No need to use "be" twice.

I used to be shy and be scared to do everything, but now I'm more confident. I used to be shy and scared to do everything, but now I'm more confident.

One sentence I really love is "If you're too scared, do it scared!".


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One sentence I really love is, "If you're too scared, do it scared!". One sentence I really love is, "If you're too scared, do it scared!".

I'm proud of myself because I was so brave to get out of my comfort zone and becoming the person I admired.


I'm proud of myself because I was so brave to get out of my comfort zone and becoming thee a person I admired. I'm proud of myself because I was so brave to get out of my comfort zone and become a person I admired.

"A person I admire" is usually how we say this - after all, there isn't *one* specific person you admire who you are becoming, you don't know what you're going to become!

I'm proud of myself because I was so brave enough to get out of my comfort zone and becominge the type of person I admired. I'm proud of myself because I was brave enough to get out of my comfort zone and become the type of person I admire.

Overall, I feel that it was a valuable experience and it helped me change my mindset and I know that I've grown a lot.


Overall, I feel that it was a valuable experience and it helped me change my mindset, and I know that I've grown a lot. Overall, I feel that it was a valuable experience and it helped me change my mindset, and I know that I've grown a lot.

Overall, I feel that it was a valuable experience and it helped me change my mindset and; I know that I've grown a lot. Overall, I feel that it was a valuable experience and it helped me change my mindset; I know that I've grown a lot.

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