Hi all . I'm happybee H. I hope you’re all doing well . I’m here to learn English because of my language barrier, as I am not able to find a job in my field. Hi all. I'm happybee. I hope you’re all doing well. I’m here to learn English because of my language barrier, as I am not able to find a job in my field.

Just adding some punctuation here, as it's an important part of practicing writing in a new language.

Hi all Imeveryone, My name is happybee H. I hope you’re all doing well. I’m here to learn English because of language barrier I am not able to find a job in my field because of my language barrier . Hi everyone, My name is happybee. I hope you’re all doing well. I’m here to learn English because I am not able to find a job in my field because of my language barrier .

To introduce yourself, say "my name is happybee" instead of "I'm happybee"

Hi all ! I'm hHappybee H. I hope you’re all doing well . I’m here to learn English because of language barrier I am not able to find a job in my fieldI can't find a job in my field because of the language barrier . Hi all! I'm Happybee. I hope you’re all doing well. I’m here to learn English because I can't find a job in my field because of the language barrier .

Hi all I'm happybee H. I hope you’re all doing well . I’'m here to learn English because ofthe language barrier I am not able toprevents me from finding a job in my field. Hi all I'm happybee. I hope you’re all doing well. I'm here to learn English because the language barrier prevents me from finding a job in my field.

Hi all everyone I'm happybee Hope you’re all doing well I’m here to learn English because of language barriers as I am not able to find a job in my field. Hi everyone I'm happybee Hope you’re all doing well I’m here to learn English because of language barriers as I am not able to find a job in my field.

Hi all everyone I'm happybee Hope you’re all are doing well I’m here to learn English because of a language barrier, I am not able to find a job in my field. Hi everyone I'm happybee Hope you all are doing well I’m here to learn English because of a language barrier, I am not able to find a job in my field.

To get registered in my professional body, I need to score a 7 overall 7 in (the) IELTS o. Otherwise, I can’won't be able to get a job in my field. To get registered in my professional body, I need to score a 7 overall in (the) IELTS. Otherwise, I won't be able to get a job in my field.

You -need- to do something (presently) or you -will not be- (in the future) able to do something. The structure "can't be able" is never grammatically correct, just for reference.

To get registered in my professional body I need to score overall 7 in IELTS, otherwise I cawon’t be able to get a job in my field. To get registered in my professional body I need to score overall 7 in IELTS, otherwise I won’t be able to get a job in my field.

"won't" is short for "will not", which is really confusing!

To get registered in my professional body I need to score overall 7 in IELTS otherwise I cawon’t be able to get a job in my field. To get registered in my professional body I need to score overall 7 in IELTS otherwise I won’t be able to get a job in my field.

To get registered in my professional body I need to score overall 7 in IELTS, otherwise I can’won't be able to get a job in my field. To get registered in my professional body I need to score overall 7 in IELTS, otherwise I won't be able to get a job in my field.

To get registered in my professional body I need to score overall 7 in IELTS otherwise I cawon’t be able to get a job in my field. To get registered in my professional body I need to score overall 7 in IELTS otherwise I won’t be able to get a job in my field.

To get registered in my professional bodyfield I need to score overall 7 in IELTS otherwise I can’won't be able to get a job in my field. To get registered in my professional field I need to score overall 7 in IELTS otherwise I won't be able to get a job in my field.

I graduated with good grades, but because of this language barrier I couldn’t able to find a job in my field after I moved to an English -speaking country. I graduated with good grades, but because of this language barrier I couldn’t find a job in my field after I moved to an English-speaking country.

Another note here that "couldn't able" is not correct - you don't need the able.

I graduated with good grades but because of this language barrier I couldwasn’t able to find a job in my field after I moved to an English speaking country. I graduated with good grades but because of this language barrier I wasn’t able to find a job in my field after I moved to an English speaking country.

I graduated with good grades but because of thise language barrier I couldwasn’t able to find a job in my field after I moved to an English speaking country. I graduated with good grades but because of the language barrier I wasn’t able to find a job in my field after I moved to an English speaking country.

I graduated with good grades, but because of this language barrier, I couldn’thaven't been able to find a job in my field after I moveding to an English speaking country. I graduated with good grades, but because of this language barrier, I haven't been able to find a job in my field after moving to an English speaking country.

I graduated with good grades but because of this language barrier I couldwasn’t able to find a job in my field after I moved to an English speaking country. I graduated with good grades but because of this language barrier I wasn’t able to find a job in my field after I moved to an English speaking country.

I graduated with good grades, but because of this language barrier I couldn’t able to find a job in my field after I moved to an English speaking country. I graduated with good grades, but because of this language barrier I couldn’t find a job in my field after I moved to an English speaking country.

Plsease rate my English level. Please rate my English level.

Pls rate my English level. Pls rate my English level.

I would probably rate it a B1 or a 7 out of 10 :)