Recently, at least two members on LangCorrect wrote about the Japanese anime "Haikyu!!", Recently, at least two members on LangCorrect wrote about the Japanese anime "Haikyu!!",

I would recommend that you add a comma to connect the last part of the sentence, and to help with the 'flow' of it.

Recently, at least two members on LangCorrect wrote about the Japanese sports anime, "Haikyu!!"," which is about volleyball. Recently, at least two members on LangCorrect wrote about the Japanese sports anime, "Haikyu!!," which is about volleyball.

Tendon & Achilles Tendon Ruptures Tendon & Achilles Tendon Ruptures

Since you are not talking about a single/specific rupture, the plural form should be used

regardingwhich is about volleyball. which is about volleyball.

We don't use the word "regarding" when talking about the topic of a show.

regardingwhich is about volleyball. which is about volleyball.

"Regarding" is typically used in more formal situations, such as in a work email, and just doesn't quite sound right here. "About" simply feels more natural. "Which is" helps to connect it to the rest of the previous statement.

regarding volleyball.

I combined this phrase with the previous sentence.

In fact, two (completely different people from the previous "two") of my colleagues experienced Achilles tendon ruptures and had to undergo surgery whiledue to playing volleyball after a long hiatus. In fact, two (completely different people from the previous "two") of my colleagues experienced Achilles tendon ruptures and had to undergo surgery due to playing volleyball after a long hiatus.

Using "while" implies that the surgery occurred while they played volleyball.

In fact, two of my colleagues (completely different people from the previous "two") of my colleagues experienced Achilles tendon ruptures and had to undergo surgery whileas a consequence of playing volleyball after a long hiatus. In fact, two of my colleagues (completely different people from the previous "two") experienced Achilles tendon ruptures and had to undergo surgery as a consequence of playing volleyball after a long hiatus.

In fact, two (completely different people from those previous "two"ly mentioned) of my colleagues experienced Achilles tendon ruptures and had to undergo surgery while playing volleyball after a long hiatus. In fact, two (different from those previously mentioned) of my colleagues experienced Achilles tendon ruptures and had to undergo surgery while playing volleyball after a long hiatus.

In fact, two (completely different people from the previous "two") of myof my other colleagues experienced Achilles tendon ruptures and had to undergo surgery while playing volleyball after a long hiatus. In fact, two of my other colleagues experienced Achilles tendon ruptures and had to undergo surgery while playing volleyball after a long hiatus.

They were in their 30s and 40thirties and forties when it happened. They were in their thirties and forties when it happened.

This is just another way to state your sentence. Your sentence is fine.

Achilles tendons are not soft or elastic enough to absorb the stress from impact shockimpact from such strenuous movements. Achilles tendons are not soft or elastic enough to absorb the impact from such strenuous movements.

In conclusion, I'd prefer a ten-don (天丼 or Japanese shrimp tempura bowl) over an Achilles tendon rupture! In conclusion, I'd prefer a ten-don (天丼 or Japanese shrimp tempura bowl) over an Achilles tendon rupture!

This is funny. Very well done.. this is a sophisticated pun.

In conclusion, I'd prefer tendon (天丼 or Japanese shrimp tempura bowl) over an Achilles tendon rupture! In conclusion, I'd prefer tendon (天丼 or Japanese shrimp tempura bowl) over an Achilles tendon rupture!

ナイスジョークです！

In conclusion, I'd prefer tendon (天丼 or Japanese shrimp tempura bowl) over an Achilles tendon rupture! In conclusion, I'd prefer tendon (天丼 or Japanese shrimp tempura bowl) over an Achilles tendon rupture!

ダシャレ？（笑笑）

The former is very delicious, and I'd like to recommend that you to eat it. The former is very delicious, and I'd like to recommend that you eat it.

We usually recommend that someone does X, as opposed to recommend to X.

The former is very delicious, and I'd like to recommend you to eatry it. The former is very delicious, and I'd like to recommend you try it.

We typically use "try" as the verb when talking about eating/drinking new things. For example, go to YouTube and search "trying new foods" and you will find many, many videos with that title.

The former is very delicious, and I'd like to recommend for you to eat it. The former is very delicious, and I'd like to recommend for you to eat it.

The former is very delicious, and I'd like to recommend you to eattry it. The former is very delicious, and I'd like to recommend you to try it.

Besides sounding unnatural, "eat it" seems rather forceful

Whereas, I won't recommend that you to experience the latter. Whereas, I won't recommend that you experience the latter.

Same as above. You could also change "won't" to "don't" if you want to more strongly reinforce the unpleasantness of the experience.

Whereas, I wdon't recommend that you to experience the latter. Whereas, I don't recommend that you experience the latter.

Whereas, I won't recommend you to experience the latter. Whereas, I won't recommend you to experience the latter.

This grammar is correct, but it would sound more smooth and natural to say: "As for the latter, I wouldn't recommend it."

Whereas, I wdon't recommend you to experience the latter at all. I don't recommend you to experience the latter at all.

It's very painful and bothersome. It's very painful and bothersome.

"bothersome" is sort of like "annoying" and maybe isn't the best word choice for something as serious as a ruptured tendon. I was thinking "debilitating" as a better word choice.

Hahaha.

I don't think this is a laughing matter.