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Jan. 12, 2025

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pray to the Buddha

I don't know having the habit of worshiping Buddha in other places.
Today I went to the temple in the mountains going to worship Buddha with my family in the morning early.
We will brought the sesame oil, biscuits and fruits to the Buddha and also give some money for sesame oil.
Amazingly, there is Confucius in this temple, so many parents come to here pray for their children's smooth exams. Sincerity makes it work. I hope everything goes well!
(I didn't know many words this time, so I used translation software.)


不知道其他地方有没有拜佛的习惯,今天和家人早早就去山里的寺庙拜佛。
我们会用香油、饼干、水果去给佛祖上供,还会给点香油钱。
神奇的是这个寺庙里面有孔子,所以有很多父母过来给孩子求考试顺利。
心诚则灵,希望一切顺利!
(这次太多单词不会了,所以我用了翻译软件)

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Sincerity makes it work.

I hope everything goes well!

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I hope everything goes well!

(I didn't know many words this time, so I used translation software.)

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pray to the Buddha


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I don't know having the habit of worshiping Buddha in other places.


I don't know having thehave a habit of worshiping Buddha in other places. I don't have a habit of worshiping Buddha in other places.

This is my best guess at what you are trying to say.

I don't know havingif other places have the habit of worshiping Buddha in other places, but I went to the temple in the mountains today, early in the morning, to worship Buddha with my family. I don't know if other places have the habit of worshiping Buddha, but I went to the temple in the mountains today, early in the morning, to worship Buddha with my family.

I don't know havingif people have the habit of worshipping Buddha in other places. I don't know if people have the habit of worshipping Buddha in other places.

Today I went to the temple in the mountains going to worship Buddha with my family in the morning early.


Today I went to the temple in the mountains going to worship Buddha with my family early in the morning early. Today I went to the temple in the mountains to worship Buddha with my family early in the morning.

Light correction, this sentence is much more understandable. The composition is a bit odd, but easily comprehensible.

Today I went to the temple in the mountains going to worship Buddha with my family in the morning early.

I just combined this sentence with the previous one.

Today I went to the temple in the mountains going to worship Buddha with my family (early in the morning early/in the early morning). Today I went to the temple in the mountains to worship Buddha with my family (early in the morning/in the early morning).

Word ordering is tricky, but you can use early as an adjective to morning or with the phrase early in the morning.

We will brought the sesame oil, biscuits and fruits to the Buddha and also give some money for sesame oil.


We will brought the sesame oil, biscuits and fruits tofor the Buddha and also giave some money for sesame oil. We brought the sesame oil, biscuits and fruits for the Buddha and also gave some money for sesame oil.

I generally understood the meaning of this sentence, but I did not understand the second phrase.

We will brought the sesame oil,ould give biscuits and, fruits to the Buddha and also give, sesame oil, as well as some money forto buy sesame oil, to Buddha. We would give biscuits, fruits, sesame oil, as well as some money to buy sesame oil, to Buddha.

We will brought the sesame oil, biscuits and fruits to the Buddha and also giave some money for sesame oil. We brought the sesame oil, biscuits and fruits to the Buddha and also gave some money for sesame oil.

Watch out for the tenses, this should all be in the past tense since it happened this morning.

Amazingly, there is Confucius in this temple, so many parents come to here pray for their children's smooth exams.


Amazingly, there is shrine to Confucius is in this temple, so many parents come to here to pray for their children's smooth exams. A shrine to Confucius is in this temple, so many parents come here to pray for their children's exams.

Amazingly implies a surprise, but the rest of the sentence sounds as if this a given. Additionally, when you say "Confucius" is in this temple, it sounds like Confucius himself is actually there. I've added "a shrine to Confucius" but that may not be exactly what you meant.

Amazingly, there is Confucius is in this temple, so many parents come to here to pray for their children's smooth examsexams to go smoothly. Amazingly, Confucius is in this temple, so many parents come to here to pray for their children's exams to go smoothly.

Amazingly, there is Confuciusalso (a) Confucius (statue) in this temple, so many parents come to here to pray for their children's smooth exams. Amazingly, there is also (a) Confucius (statue) in this temple, so many parents come here to pray for their children's smooth exams.

I think you mean a Confucius statue? The original phrasing makes it seem like Confucius himself is in the temple. Plenty of English speakers use "a Buddha" to refer to statues of Buddha, but generally this usage doesn't extend to statues of other individuals.

Sincerity makes it work.


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Sincerity makes it work. Sincerity makes it work.

This is technically correct but I don't understand what you are trying to say here.

I hope everything goes well!


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(I didn't know many words this time, so I used translation software.)


(I didn't know many words this time, so I used a translation software.) (I didn't know many words this time, so I used a translation software.)

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