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Fuyang City

Fuyang, a prefecture-level city under the jurisdiction of Anhui Province, is located in the northwest of Anhui and borders Henan Province.

It governs three districts, four counties and one county-level city.

Fuyang is mostly plain, and most of the area is farmland. Agriculture is the main industry, and the main crops are wheat, corn, soybeans and rice.

It has an airport, a high-speed railway station, an ordinary railway station and several long-distance bus stations. The airport has flights to most major cities in China, such as Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou, and so forth.

The tourist attractions here include Yingzhou West Lake, Happy Ecological Park, Balihe Water Park, etc.

Two main rivers flow through the city. The Ying River and the Quan River converge in the center of the city, dividing the city into three parts, namely Yingzhou District, Yingquan District and Yingdong District.

The universities in the city are Fuyang Normal University, Fuyang Institute of Technology, College of Information Engineering of Fuyang Normal University, Fuyang Preschool Teachers College, and three other privately founded colleges.

The iconic landmark of Fuyang is the China Resources Fuyang Center - two tall buildings on the south side of Shuangqing Bay Park, with a height of 240 meters.

In general, Fuyang City is a medium-sized city in China with a population of 1.6 million and an area of 160 square kilometers (not including suburbs and rural areas). Last year, it achieved a GDP of 332 billion, which is above the average compared with other prefectural-level cities in China.

The best high school is Fuyang No.1 High School. Every year, about 8 graduates are qualified to enter Peking University and Tsinghua University.

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Fuyang City

Fuyang, a prefecture-level city under the jurisdiction of Anhui Province, is located in the northwest of Anhui and borders Henan Province.

It governs three districts, four counties and one county-level city.

Fuyang is mostly plain, and most of the area is farmland.

Agriculture is the main industry, and the main crops are wheat, corn, soybeans and rice.

It has an airport, a high-speed railway station, an ordin regulary railway station and several long-distance bus stations.

The airport has flights to most major cities in China, such as Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou, and so forth.on.

The tourist attractions here include the Yingzhou the West Lake, the Happy Ecological Park, Balithe Water Park, etc.

Two main rivers flow through the city.

The Ying River and the Quan River converge in the center of the city, dividing the city into three parts, namely Yingzhou District, Yingquan District and Yingdong District.

The universities in the city are Fuyang Normal University, Fuyang Institute of Technology, College of Information Engineering of Fuyang Normal University, Fuyang Preschool Teachers College, and three other privately founded colleges.

The iconic landmark of Fuyang is the China Resources Fuyang Center - two tall buildings on the south side of Shuangqing Bay Park, with a height of 240 meters.

In general, Fuyang City is a medium-sized city in China with a population of 1.6 million and an area of 160 square kilometers (not including suburbs and rural areas).

Last year, it achieved a GDP of 332 billion, which is above the average compared with other prefectural-level cities in China.

The best high school is Fuyang No.1 High School.

Every year, about 8 graduates are qualified to enter Peking University and Tsinghua University.

Fuyang is mostly plains, and most of the area is farmland.

It has an airport, a high-speed railway station, an ordinregulary railway station and several long-distance bus stations.

"regular" sounds a bit better than "ordinary." "Ordinary" can suggest something plain, unimpressive, or not special.

I might write this as "It has an airport, two railway stations (one of which is high-speed), and several long-distance bus stations.

The airport has flights to most major cities in China, such as Beijing, Shanghai, and Guangzhou, and so forth.

"and so forth" is redundant with "such as."

The tourist attractions here include Yingzhou West Lake, Happy Ecological Park, and Balihe Water Park, etc.

Same as above, "etc" is not needed because include already implies there are more attractions.

The most iconic landmark of Fuyang is the China Resources Fuyang Center - two tall buildings on the south side of Shuangqing Bay Park, with a height of 240 meters.

In general, Fuyang City is a medium-sized city in China with a population of 1.6 million and an area of 160 square kilometers (not including suburbs and rural areas).

"In general" is awkward here. Also, I would put this information in the first or second sentence.

Last year, it achieved a GDP of 332 billion, which is above the average compared with other prefectural-level cities in China.

also correct would be "which is above the average for prefectural-level cities in China."

Every year, abrout 8nd eight graduates are qualified to enteraccepted by Peking University and Tsinghua University.

Spell out all small numbers less than ten. "Accepted by" is a common way to say that a student is allowed to attend a university.

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Fuyang City

Fuyang, a prefecture-level city under the jurisdiction of Anhui Province, is located in the northwest of Anhui and borders Henan Province.

It governs three districts, four counties and one county-level city.

Fuyang is mostly plains, and most of the area is farmland.

Agriculture is the main industry, and the main crops are wheat, corn, soybeans and rice.

It has an airport, a high-speed railway station, an ordinary railway station and several long-distance bus stations.

The airport has flights to most major cities in China, such as Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou, and so forth.

The tourist attractions here include Yingzhou West Lake, Happy Ecological Park, Balihe Water Park, etc.

Two main rivers flow through the city.

The Ying River and the Quan River converge in the center of the city, dividing the city into three parts, namely Yingzhou District, Yingquan District and Yingdong District.

The universities in the city are Fuyang Normal University, Fuyang Institute of Technology, College of Information Engineering of Fuyang Normal University, Fuyang Preschool Teachers College, and three other privately founded colleges.

The iconic landmark of Fuyang is the China Resources Fuyang Center - two tall buildings on the south side of Shuangqing Bay Park, with a height of 240 meters.

In general, Fuyang City is a medium-sized city in China with a population of 1.6 million and an area of 160 square kilometers (not including suburbs and rural areas).

Last year, it achieved a GDP of 332 billion, which is above the average compared with other prefectural-level cities in China.

The best high school is Fuyang No.1 High School.

Every year, about 8 graduates are qualified to enter Peking University and Tsinghua University.

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July 13, 2024

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It IS great.

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Fuyang City

Fuyang, a prefecture-level city under the jurisdiction of Anhui Province, is located in the northwest of Anhui and borders Henan Province.


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It governs three districts, four counties and one county-level city.


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Fuyang is mostly plain, and most of the area is farmland.


Fuyang is mostly plains, and most of the area is farmland.

Fuyang is mostly plains, and most of the area is farmland.

Fuyang is mostly plain, and most of the area is farmland.

Agriculture is the main industry, and the main crops are wheat, corn, soybeans and rice.


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Agriculture is the main industry, and the main crops are wheat, corn, soybeans and rice.

It has an airport, a high-speed railway station, an ordinary railway station and several long-distance bus stations.


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It has an airport, a high-speed railway station, an ordinregulary railway station and several long-distance bus stations.

"regular" sounds a bit better than "ordinary." "Ordinary" can suggest something plain, unimpressive, or not special. I might write this as "It has an airport, two railway stations (one of which is high-speed), and several long-distance bus stations.

It has an airport, a high-speed railway station, an ordin regulary railway station and several long-distance bus stations.

The airport has flights to most major cities in China, such as Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou, and so forth.


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The airport has flights to most major cities in China, such as Beijing, Shanghai, and Guangzhou, and so forth.

"and so forth" is redundant with "such as."

The airport has flights to most major cities in China, such as Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou, and so forth.on.

The Ying River and the Quan River converge in the center of the city, dividing the city into three parts, namely Yingzhou District, Yingquan District and Yingdong District.


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The universities in the city are Fuyang Normal University, Fuyang Institute of Technology, College of Information Engineering of Fuyang Normal University, Fuyang Preschool Teachers College, and three other privately founded colleges.


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The iconic landmark of Fuyang is the China Resources Fuyang Center - two tall buildings on the south side of Shuangqing Bay Park, with a height of 240 meters.


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The most iconic landmark of Fuyang is the China Resources Fuyang Center - two tall buildings on the south side of Shuangqing Bay Park, with a height of 240 meters.

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In general, Fuyang City is a medium-sized city in China with a population of 1.6 million and an area of 160 square kilometers (not including suburbs and rural areas).


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In general, Fuyang City is a medium-sized city in China with a population of 1.6 million and an area of 160 square kilometers (not including suburbs and rural areas).

"In general" is awkward here. Also, I would put this information in the first or second sentence.

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The best high school is Fuyang No.1 High School.


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The tourist attractions here include Yingzhou West Lake, Happy Ecological Park, Balihe Water Park, etc.


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The tourist attractions here include Yingzhou West Lake, Happy Ecological Park, and Balihe Water Park, etc.

Same as above, "etc" is not needed because include already implies there are more attractions.

The tourist attractions here include the Yingzhou the West Lake, the Happy Ecological Park, Balithe Water Park, etc.

Two main rivers flow through the city.


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Last year, it achieved a GDP of 332 billion, which is above the average compared with other prefectural-level cities in China.


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Last year, it achieved a GDP of 332 billion, which is above the average compared with other prefectural-level cities in China.

also correct would be "which is above the average for prefectural-level cities in China."

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Every year, about 8 graduates are qualified to enter Peking University and Tsinghua University.


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Every year, abrout 8nd eight graduates are qualified to enteraccepted by Peking University and Tsinghua University.

Spell out all small numbers less than ten. "Accepted by" is a common way to say that a student is allowed to attend a university.

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