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Fuyang

I was born in a small village of Taihe County, Fuyang City. Fuyang is my hometown.
The first time I went to Fuyang was in 1982 because going to school. The urban area population of the city then was a bit more than 150000 and the urban built-up area was about 15 square kilometres.
At that time, the famous buildings in this city were grand theater, department store, bus station and railway station.
The famous roads was Renmin road, Yingzhou road, Yinghe road and Yingshang road, especially the first two.
The tallest building was Fuyang hotel and it had five floors.
China was still in developing stage then, there were no tall buildings, no crowd people, no a lot of cars.
Of course, the city at that time wasn't looked as beautiful as it is now, especially in green works.
Now the city urban district has a population of about 1600000; his urban area covers around 160 square kilometres and various tall buildings and cars are all over the city.
It's estimated that each family has two or three cars.
Fuyang had rated of third-tier city since 2018, and its position has been risen from more than one hundred to seventy-eighth now.
The green works has been developed rapidly and you can see trees, flowers and parks everywhere.
The entire city are tidy and clean; it's no worse than a big city.
Like other cities in China, the development of Fuyang is very fast.
As a Fuyang person, I'm very happy to live here and I'm very proud of it.

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Fuyang is my hometown.

The urban areacity's population of the city then was a bit more than 150,000 and the urban built-updeveloped urban area was about 15 square kilometres.

At that time, the famous buildings in thise city were a grand theater, a department store, a bus station and a railway station.

China was still in developing stage then, t. There were no tall buildings, no crowds of people, and not a lot of cars.

Of course, the city at that time wasdidn't looked as beautiful as it idoes now, especially in terms of green worksspace.

Now the city's urban district has a population of about 1,600,000; hits urban area covers around 160 square kilometres and various tall buildings and cars are all over the city.

It's estimated that each family has two or three cars.

Fuyang hadwas rated ofa third-tier city since 2018, and its position has been risen from more than one hundred to seventy-eighth now.

The green works has beenspace has developed rapidly and you can see trees, flowers and parks everywhere.

Like other cities in China, the development of Fuyang is very fast.

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Jack

Aug. 12, 2020

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China was still in developing stage then, t. There were no tall buildings, no crowds of people, and not a lot of cars.

Why the last one is not instead of no ?

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Jack

Aug. 12, 2020

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Thank you very much. I can help you with Chinese.

I was born in a small village ofin Taihe County, Fuyang City.

Fuyang is my hometown.

The first time I went to Fuyang was in 1982 because going tofor school.

The urban area population of the city then was a bit more than 150,000 and the urban built-up area was about 15 square kilometres.

At that time, the famous buildings in this city were a grand theater, a department store, a bus station and a railway station.

The famous roads wasere Renmin rRoad, Yingzhou rRoad, Yinghe rRoad and Yingshang rRoad, especially the first two. The first two were especially famous.

The tallest building was Fuyang hHotel, and it had five floors.

China was still in developing stage then, t. There were no tall buildings, no crowds of people, and not a lot of cars.

Of course, the city at that time wasn'didn’t looked as beautiful as it is now, especially in terms of green works.

Now the city urban district has a population of about 1,600,000; this urban area covers around 160 square kilometres, and variousthe city is full of tall buildings and cars are all over the city.

It's estimated that each family has two or three cars.

Fuyang hads been rated ofa third-tier city since 2018, and its position has been risen from more thanbelow one hundred to seventy-eighth now.

The green works hasve been developed rapidly and you can see trees, flowers and parks everywhere.

The entire city areis tidy and clean; it's no worse than a big city.

Like other cities in China, the development of Fuyang is very fast.

As a Fuyang personperson from Fuyang, I'm very happy to live here, and I'm very proud of it.

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Jack

Aug. 12, 2020

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非常感谢你的修改,让我学到了很多东西,谢谢你!

Fuyang


I was born in a small village of Taihe County, Fuyang City.


I was born in a small village ofin Taihe County, Fuyang City.

Fuyang is my hometown.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The first time I went to Fuyang was in 1982 because going to school.


The first time I went to Fuyang was in 1982 because going tofor school.

The urban area population of the city then was a bit more than 150000 and the urban built-up area was about 15 square kilometres.


The urban area population of the city then was a bit more than 150,000 and the urban built-up area was about 15 square kilometres.

The urban areacity's population of the city then was a bit more than 150,000 and the urban built-updeveloped urban area was about 15 square kilometres.

At that time, the famous buildings in this city were grand theater, department store, bus station and railway station.


At that time, the famous buildings in this city were a grand theater, a department store, a bus station and a railway station.

At that time, the famous buildings in thise city were a grand theater, a department store, a bus station and a railway station.

The famous roads was Renmin road, Yingzhou road, Yinghe road and Yingshang road, especially the first two.


The famous roads wasere Renmin rRoad, Yingzhou rRoad, Yinghe rRoad and Yingshang rRoad, especially the first two. The first two were especially famous.

The tallest building was Fuyang hotel and it had five floors.


The tallest building was Fuyang hHotel, and it had five floors.

China was still in developing stage then, there were no tall buildings, no crowd people, no a lot of cars.


China was still in developing stage then, t. There were no tall buildings, no crowds of people, and not a lot of cars.

China was still in developing stage then, t. There were no tall buildings, no crowds of people, and not a lot of cars.

Of course, the city at that time wasn't looked as beautiful as it is now, especially in green works.


Of course, the city at that time wasn'didn’t looked as beautiful as it is now, especially in terms of green works.

Of course, the city at that time wasdidn't looked as beautiful as it idoes now, especially in terms of green worksspace.

Now the city urban district has a population of about 1600000; his urban area covers around 160 square kilometres and various tall buildings and cars are all over the city.


Now the city urban district has a population of about 1,600,000; this urban area covers around 160 square kilometres, and variousthe city is full of tall buildings and cars are all over the city.

Now the city's urban district has a population of about 1,600,000; hits urban area covers around 160 square kilometres and various tall buildings and cars are all over the city.

It's estimated that each family has two or three cars.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Fuyang had rated of third-tier city since 2018, and its position has been risen from more than one hundred to seventy-eighth now.


Fuyang hads been rated ofa third-tier city since 2018, and its position has been risen from more thanbelow one hundred to seventy-eighth now.

Fuyang hadwas rated ofa third-tier city since 2018, and its position has been risen from more than one hundred to seventy-eighth now.

The green works has been developed rapidly and you can see trees, flowers and parks everywhere.


The green works hasve been developed rapidly and you can see trees, flowers and parks everywhere.

The green works has beenspace has developed rapidly and you can see trees, flowers and parks everywhere.

The entire city are tidy and clean; it's no worse than a big city.


The entire city areis tidy and clean; it's no worse than a big city.

Like other cities in China, the development of Fuyang is very fast.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As a Fuyang person, I'm very happy to live here and I'm very proud of it.


As a Fuyang personperson from Fuyang, I'm very happy to live here, and I'm very proud of it.

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