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izyvhs

Nov. 27, 2021

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Furture and big decisions

My family say I'm indecisive, I usually disagree because lots of times those things just aren't important so I just let them decide for me. But recently I had to make an important decision that is likely to have a huge impact in my life. Surprisingly, my parents didn't seem to worry about it. In the beginning I couldn't understand how they could not be interested on it, now I actually find it better that they didn't do anything. I was feeling lost and anxious, but I calmed down and began to figure out what is better for me. I don't know if it was a good decision because it will just come true in February, but I'm happy with it.

Have a great day <3

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The Furture and bBig dDecisions

Just "future" is okay, but "the future" is more natural.

My family say I'm indecisive, I usuallybut I disagree because lotsmost of times those things just aren'he decisions aren't that important so I just let them decide for me.

"the decisions" should be stated first, and then you can use less specific language ("those things") to refer back to it.

Using "just" 2 times is grammatically okay, but I replaced one with "that" for style reasons. Not using the same word twice in one sentence sounds more polished.

Note: "my family say" is correct in British English, but not American English. In American English, "my family says" is correct.

But recently I had to make an important decision that is likely to have a huge impact ion my life.

Surprisingly, my parents didn't seem to worry about it.

In the beginning, I couldn't understand how they could not be interested oin it, but now I actually find it better that they didn't do anything.

Using connectors like "but" or "and" is necessary when you have multiple ideas in a sentence.

I was feeling lost and anxious, but I calmed down and began to figure out what is bestter for me.

"better" is possible, but "best" is more natural.

I don't know if it was a good decision because it will just come trueonly become reality in February, but I'm happy with it.

We say wishes and dreams come true, but it doesn't work for decisions.

We say decisions are realized, come into effect, become reality, and so on.

Have a great day <3

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Great work! And I hope your decision turns out as you hope! :)

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izyvhs

Nov. 28, 2021

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Thank you very much! I was confused about whether I should use "family says" or "family say" and you're corrections helped me a lot.

Furture and big decisions


The Furture and bBig dDecisions

Just "future" is okay, but "the future" is more natural.

My family say I'm indecisive, I usually disagree because lots of times those things just aren't important so I just let them decide for me.


My family say I'm indecisive, I usuallybut I disagree because lotsmost of times those things just aren'he decisions aren't that important so I just let them decide for me.

"the decisions" should be stated first, and then you can use less specific language ("those things") to refer back to it. Using "just" 2 times is grammatically okay, but I replaced one with "that" for style reasons. Not using the same word twice in one sentence sounds more polished. Note: "my family say" is correct in British English, but not American English. In American English, "my family says" is correct.

But recently I had to make an important decision that is likely to have a huge impact in my life.


But recently I had to make an important decision that is likely to have a huge impact ion my life.

Surprisingly, my parents didn't seem to worry about it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the beginning I couldn't understand how they could not be interested on it, now I actually find it better that they didn't do anything.


In the beginning, I couldn't understand how they could not be interested oin it, but now I actually find it better that they didn't do anything.

Using connectors like "but" or "and" is necessary when you have multiple ideas in a sentence.

I was feeling lost and anxious, but I calmed down and began to figure out what is better for me.


I was feeling lost and anxious, but I calmed down and began to figure out what is bestter for me.

"better" is possible, but "best" is more natural.

I don't if it was a good decision because it will just come true in February, but I'm happy with it.


Have a great day <3


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't know if it was a good decision because it will just come true in February, but I'm happy with it.


I don't know if it was a good decision because it will just come trueonly become reality in February, but I'm happy with it.

We say wishes and dreams come true, but it doesn't work for decisions. We say decisions are realized, come into effect, become reality, and so on.

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