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boneappletea

Aug. 3, 2022

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I rode roller-skates in a very long time today. I think the last time I did was when I was in second grade in elementary school. I went to the roller-skating rink with my friends and a teacher in class. We arrived in there earlier than the opening time so we had to wait a little bit. After we got the skates and put our feet on the floor, everyone struggled to get used to balance their body and go forward. It took me a few minutes but I got used to it soon. I didn't expect this would be fun but I really enjoyed. I felt like I went back to my childhood and hang out with friends in a very childish way. I think I forgot the fun of doing something physically because I sat on my chair for a long time and study every day. I want to go ice skating rink with friends sometime soon.

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Fun Day

After a very long time, I rode roller-skates in a very long time today.

I think the last time I did this was when I was in second grade in elementary school.

I went to the roller-skating rink with my friends and a teacher in class.

We arrived in there earlier than the opening time so we had to wait a little bit.

After we got the skates and put our feet on the floor, everyone struggled to get used to balance their body and go forward.

It took me a few minutes but I soon got used to it soon.

I didn't expect this wouldto be fun but I really enjoyed it.

I felt like I went back to my childhood and haung out with friends in a very childish way.

I think I forgot the fun of doing something physically because I sait on my chair for a long time and study every day.

I want to go to an ice skating rink with friends sometime soon.

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That sounds fun. Great job! :)

I rode roller-skates infor a very long time today.

I think the last time I did this was when I was in second grade in elementary school.

"this" refers to the subject of the previous sentence (rollerskating)

I went to the roller-skating rink with my friends and a teacher infrom class.

Not so clear if you went with your class as a class trip or just with this singular teacher and friends

We arrived in there earlier than the opening time so we had to wait a little bit.

After we got the skates and put our feet on the floor, everyone struggled to get used to balancefind their bodyalance and go forward.

That is the expression I would use

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Really nice job🥳

Fun Day


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I rode roller-skates in a very long time today.


I rode roller-skates infor a very long time today.

After a very long time, I rode roller-skates in a very long time today.

I think the last time I did was when I was in second grade in elementary school.


I think the last time I did this was when I was in second grade in elementary school.

"this" refers to the subject of the previous sentence (rollerskating)

I think the last time I did this was when I was in second grade in elementary school.

I went to the roller-skating rink with my friends and a teacher in class.


I went to the roller-skating rink with my friends and a teacher infrom class.

Not so clear if you went with your class as a class trip or just with this singular teacher and friends

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We arrived in there earlier than the opening time so we had to wait a little bit.


We arrived in there earlier than the opening time so we had to wait a little bit.

We arrived in there earlier than the opening time so we had to wait a little bit.

After we got the skates and put our feet on the floor, everyone struggled to get used to balance their body and go forward.


After we got the skates and put our feet on the floor, everyone struggled to get used to balancefind their bodyalance and go forward.

That is the expression I would use

After we got the skates and put our feet on the floor, everyone struggled to get used to balance their body and go forward.

It took me a few minutes but I got used to it soon.


It took me a few minutes but I soon got used to it soon.

I didn't expect this would be fun but I really enjoyed.


I didn't expect this wouldto be fun but I really enjoyed it.

I felt like I went back to my childhood and hang out with friends in a very childish way.


I felt like I went back to my childhood and haung out with friends in a very childish way.

I think I forgot the fun of doing something physically because I sat on my chair for a long time and study every day.


I think I forgot the fun of doing something physically because I sait on my chair for a long time and study every day.

I want to go ice skating rink with friends sometime soon.


I want to go to an ice skating rink with friends sometime soon.

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