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jorgenager

April 19, 2022

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From Bad to Worse

Throughout the pandemic, I have felt completely helpless most of time. I have suffered from cancer three times but that compared to going through two long years of such a deadly pandemic is almost irrelevant. Although having cancer is considered one of the worst things a human being can suffer from, at least I was surrounded by my family who always were by my side. I knew that, even though I was very ill, they were not. And that once, because every time I had cancer I positively knew I was going to overcome it, I was at home again, life would be as it was before. However, throughout the pandemic things were completely different. It wasn’t a matter of one person being ill. Nobody knew what might happen. Nobody was safe. You could become infected in anywhere anytime. Worst of all, it wasn’t something that was only happening in my city or my country, COVID was raging through the whole world. And of course, nobody knew how to stop it. Now, at least temporally, it seems that COVID positive cases are the lowest ever. However, there is an even greater threat to human beings. If the pandemic was unpredictable, and I firmly believe it still continues to be, Putin is even more unforeseeable and given the case, he could destroy the world in the blink of an eye. So we’re almost in the same place that we were two years ago. Nobody knows what can happen tomorrow. Nobody can do anything to stop this incomprehensible war. Nobody can tell Putin that what he’s doing is completely unjustifiable. We’re at the mercy of someone who one day decided that Ukraine was his backyard and everything inside it was his. And on top of that, he’s unstoppable because, even though things aren’t going as planned, he has something that could reduce the whole planet to ashes. As Mafalda said: “Stop the world, I want to get off”

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Throughout the pandemic, I have felt completely helpless most of the time.

Although having cancer is considered one of the worst things a human being can suffer from, at least I was surrounded by my family who was always were by my side.

And that once, because every time I had cancer I positively knew I was going to overcome it, once I was at home again, life would be as it was before.

However, throughout the pandemic things were completely different.

You could become infected in anywhere anytime.

If the pandemic was unpredictable, and I firmly believe it still continues to beis, Putin is even more unforeseeableso and given the case, he could destroy the world in the blink of an eye.

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jorgenager

April 20, 2022

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Thanks calliecat23 for taking the time to read and correct my post.

From Bad to Worse

Throughout the pandemic, I have felt completely helpless most of time.

I have suffered from cancer three times, but that compared to going through two long years of such a deadly pandemic is almost irrelev, that seems less significant.

Although having cancer is considered one of the worst things a human being can suffer from, at least I was surrounded by my family who were always were by my side.

I knew that, even though I was very ill, they were not.

And that once, because eEvery time I had cancer, I positively knew I was going to overcome it, and that once I was at home again, life would be as it was before.

However, throughout the pandemic things were completely different.

It wasn’t a matter of one person being ill. Nobody knew what might happen.

Nobody was safe.

You could become infected in anywhere, anytime.

Worst of all, it wasn’t something that was only happening in my city or my country, COVID was raging through the whole world.

And of course, nobody knew how to stop it.

Now, at least temporalrily, it seems that COVID positive cases are the lowest everthey have ever been.

However, there is an even greater threat to human beings.

IfAlthough the pandemic was unpredictable, and I firmly believe it still continues to be, Putin is's actions were even more unforeseeable and g. Given the cashance, he could destroy the world in the blink of an eye.

So we’re almost in the same place that we were two years ago.

Nobody knows what canwill happen tomorrow.

Your original sentence is not incorrect, but this sounds more natural.

Nobody can do anything to stop this incomprehensible war.

Nobody can tell Putin that what he’s doing is completely unjustifiable.

We’re at the mercy of someone who one day decided that Ukraine was his backyard and everything inside it was his.

And on top of that, he’s unstoppable because, even though things aren’t going as planned, he has something that could reduce the whole planet to ashes.

As Mafalda said: “Stop the world, I want to get off”

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Excellent writing.

We live in strange and scary times, don't we?
Hopefully the future will be brighter. :)

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jorgenager

April 20, 2022

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I hope so too. Thanks lucylavelle for taking the time to read and correct my post.

Throughout the pandemic, I have felt completely helpless most of timethroughout most of the pandemic.

I have suffered fromhad cancer three times but that compared to going through two long years of such a deadly pandemic is almost irrelevantpales in comparison.

Although having cancer is considered one of the worst things a human being can suffer from, at least I was surrounded by my family who was always were by my side.

I knew that, even though I was very ill, they were not.

And that once, bBecause every time I had cancer I positively knew I was going to overcome it, and that once I was at home again, life would be as it was before.

However, throughout the pandemic things werehave been completely different.

It wasn’t a matter of one person being ill. Nobody knew what might happen.

Nobody was safe.

You could become infected in anywhere anytime.

Worst of all, it wasn’t something that was only happening in my city or my country, COVID was raging through the whole world.

And of course, nobody knew how to stop it.

Now, at least temporally, it seems that COVID positivethe number of COVID cases areis the lowest everit's ever been.

However, there is an even greater threat to human beings.

If the pandemic was unpredictable, and I firmly believe it still continues to be, Putin is even more unforeseeable and given the cashance, he could destroy the world in the blink of an eye.

So we’re almost in the same place that we were two years ago.

Nobody knows what can happen tomorrow.

Nobody can do anything to stop this incomprehensible war.

Nobody can tell Putin that what he’s doing is completely unjustifiable.

We’re at the mercy of someone who one day decided that Ukraine was his backyard and everything inside it was his.

And on top of that, he’s unstoppable because, even though things aren’t going as planned, he has something that could reduce the whole planet to ashes.

As Mafalda said: “Stop the world, I want to get off”

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jorgenager

April 19, 2022

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Thanks Jimmy_jon for taking the time to read and correct my post.

From Bad to Worse


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Throughout the pandemic, I have felt completely helpless most of time.


Throughout the pandemic, I have felt completely helpless most of timethroughout most of the pandemic.

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Throughout the pandemic, I have felt completely helpless most of the time.

I have suffered from cancer three times but that compared to going through two long years of such a deadly pandemic is almost irrelevant.


I have suffered fromhad cancer three times but that compared to going through two long years of such a deadly pandemic is almost irrelevantpales in comparison.

I have suffered from cancer three times, but that compared to going through two long years of such a deadly pandemic is almost irrelev, that seems less significant.

Although having cancer is considered one of the worst things a human being can suffer from, at least I was surrounded by my family who always were by my side.


Although having cancer is considered one of the worst things a human being can suffer from, at least I was surrounded by my family who was always were by my side.

Although having cancer is considered one of the worst things a human being can suffer from, at least I was surrounded by my family who were always were by my side.

Although having cancer is considered one of the worst things a human being can suffer from, at least I was surrounded by my family who was always were by my side.

I knew that, even though I was very ill, they were not.


I knew that, even though I was very ill, they were not.

I knew that, even though I was very ill, they were not.

And that once, because every time I had cancer I positively knew I was going to overcome it, I was at home again, life would be as it was before.


And that once, bBecause every time I had cancer I positively knew I was going to overcome it, and that once I was at home again, life would be as it was before.

And that once, because eEvery time I had cancer, I positively knew I was going to overcome it, and that once I was at home again, life would be as it was before.

And that once, because every time I had cancer I positively knew I was going to overcome it, once I was at home again, life would be as it was before.

However, throughout the pandemic things were completely different.


However, throughout the pandemic things werehave been completely different.

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It wasn’t a matter of one person being ill. Nobody knew what might happen.


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Nobody was safe.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You could become infected in anywhere anytime.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You could become infected in anywhere, anytime.

You could become infected in anywhere anytime.

Worst of all, it wasn’t something that was only happening in my city or my country, COVID was raging through the whole world.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And of course, nobody knew how to stop it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now, at least temporally, it seems that COVID positive cases are the lowest ever.


Now, at least temporally, it seems that COVID positivethe number of COVID cases areis the lowest everit's ever been.

Now, at least temporalrily, it seems that COVID positive cases are the lowest everthey have ever been.

However, there is an even greater threat to human beings.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If the pandemic was unpredictable, and I firmly believe it still continues to be, Putin is even more unforeseeable and given the case, he could destroy the world in the blink of an eye.


If the pandemic was unpredictable, and I firmly believe it still continues to be, Putin is even more unforeseeable and given the cashance, he could destroy the world in the blink of an eye.

IfAlthough the pandemic was unpredictable, and I firmly believe it still continues to be, Putin is's actions were even more unforeseeable and g. Given the cashance, he could destroy the world in the blink of an eye.

If the pandemic was unpredictable, and I firmly believe it still continues to beis, Putin is even more unforeseeableso and given the case, he could destroy the world in the blink of an eye.

So we’re almost in the same place that we were two years ago.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Nobody knows what can happen tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Nobody knows what canwill happen tomorrow.

Your original sentence is not incorrect, but this sounds more natural.

Nobody can do anything to stop this incomprehensible war.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Nobody can tell Putin that what he’s doing is completely unjustifiable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We’re at the mercy of someone who one day decided that Ukraine was his backyard and everything inside it was his.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And on top of that, he’s unstoppable because, even though things aren’t going as planned, he has something that could reduce the whole planet to ashes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As Mafalda said: “Stop the world, I want to get off”


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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