FrigidOPTION A: Frigidity OPTION A: Feeling Frigid OPTION A: Frigidity OPTION A: Feeling Frigid

GRAMMAR: The word "frigid" is an adjective. The noun form is "frigidity." However, the word ""frigidity" has often a very specific meaning: the inability to feel physical intimacy.

I knew this could happen, and it did.COMMENT: The grammar is possible, but the word "this" is vague. Can you specify what "this" refers to? COMMENT: The grammar is possible, but the word "this" is vague. Can you specify what "this" refers to?

I tried to control those unceasing thoughts, but my eyes didn't liebetrayed the truth when I saw him in front of me. I tried to control those unceasing thoughts, but my eyes betrayed the truth when I saw him in front of me.

I tried to control those unceasing thoughts, but my eyes didn't lie when I saw him in front of me.GRAMMAR: In English, nouns come *before* pronounce. Who is "him"? SUGGESTION: Change "him" to "my former lover" (or the person you are writing about.) GRAMMAR: In English, nouns come *before* pronounce. Who is "him"? SUGGESTION: Change "him" to "my former lover" (or the person you are writing about.)

COMMENT: In some language such as Spanish, pronouns can come *before* nouns. However, in English and German they must come *after* nouns.

I didn't imagine ithis could end like this, but he remains as frigid, just as the last time. I didn't imagine it could end like this, but he remains as frigid as the last time.

"Remains as frigid as the last time" might sound a little better here.

I didn't imagine ithis could end like this, but his posture remainsed frigid, just as thlike last time. I didn't imagine it could end like this, but his posture remained frigid, just like last time.

I think if you don't specify his posture, the reader might think he's dead.

I didn't imagine ithis could end like this, but h. He remains frigid, just as thlike last time. I didn't imagine it could end like this. He remains frigid, just like last time.

I didn't imagine this could end like this, but he remainsed frigid, just as the last time. I didn't imagine this could end like this, but he remained frigid, just as the last time.

QUESTION: Dooes "frigid" mean "motionless" or something different?

His brown, beautiful brown eyes blinked and looked finely ahead. His beautiful brown eyes blinked and looked finely ahead.

"Finely" sounds strange here. "Straight" or "fixedly" is a bit better.

His brown, beautiful eyes blinked and looked finelystraight ahead. His brown, beautiful eyes blinked and looked straight ahead.

"Finely" doesn't make sense to me. Did you maybe mean "straight ahead" or "dead ahead?"

His brown, beautiful eyes blinked and looked finely ahead. His brown, beautiful eyes blinked and looked ahead.

What do you mean by "finely"?

His brown, beautiful eyes blinked and looked finetently ahead. His brown, beautiful eyes blinked and looked intently ahead.

Only he knows the despair he's hidinges. Only he knows the despair he hides.

Stylistic here.

Only he knowsMY GUESS; He tried to hide the despair he's hid was feeling. MY GUESS; He tried to hide the despair he was feeling.