Feb. 25, 2020
Friendship
I can’t get any mask wherever I go. Then, a friend who is good at sewing suggested that she would make me a mask. I recognized it's true that “Friends are necessary for life” as people say.🥺✨ I asked her to make 5 masks. I thought I would buy her a nice cake and drink set in return for it. Last night she messaged me that they were completed, so I met her today to get them. She said, “It's 500 yen for one mask.” Then, I paid 2,500 yen to her.
I thought again and found out that money is more necessary for life than friendship.😆
どこへ行ってもマスクがありません。すると、裁縫が上手な友人がマスクを作ってくれることになりました。やっぱり「持つべきものは友」だね。5個お願いしました。お礼にケーキセットを奢ろうと思いました。出来上がったと昨日メールがあったので、今日会いました。１個500円と言われました。私は2500円払いました。
やっぱり「世の中、金」だわ。
Friendship🌟
I can’thaven't be able to get any mask no matter wherever I go.
You needed a better transition. In the next sentence you write "then" which implies that you have been searching for a period of time. "Haven't" adds this context.
次の文では、「then」と書きます。これは、一定期間検索していることを表ます。 「Haven't」はこの文脈を明らかにします。
Then, a friend who is good at sewing suggested that she wcould make me a mask.
「Would」が決めっているイメージと気がします. だが 「suggested」 は曖昧から 「Could」 の方がいいと思います。「Could」は可能性とか提案を表ますね。
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I thought maybe I would buy her a nice cake -and -drink set in return for ither kindness.
Last night she messaged me to say that they were completed, so I met her today to get them.
She said, “It's 500 yen for oneper mask.” ThenSo, I paid her 2,500 yen to her. Ouch.
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I thought again and found out thatOn second thought, maybe money is more necessary for life than friendship. 😆
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Love the story. The way the companies are pricing masks right now is sinful.
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I recognalized it' was true that “Friends are necessary for life” as people saythe saying goes.🥺✨ I asked her to make 5 masks.
I thought I would buy her a nice cake and drink set in return for it.
Last night she messaged me that they were completed, so I met her today to get them.
She said, “It's 500 yen for one mask.” Then, II then paid 2,500 yen to her.
I thought again and found out that money is more necessary for life than friendship.😆
Or if you want a direct translation of your native text, you could use "Money is everything in this world."
Feb. 25, 2020
Thank you for your kind message😭 I’ll be careful. There was a rumor that scary viruses were created by rich investors. They help some scientists create scary viruses to stimulate investments. I’ｍ not sure, but the rich will never get these viruses. Sometimes I think we are just tossed about by rich investors’ hands.😓
Feb. 25, 2020
あの。。バイオハザードというゲームを知っていますか？
https://youtu.be/mS_JTU1HNw4
Feb. 28, 2020
お! 知ってます! バイオハザードという映画も知ってます(原題:Resident Evil)。でもゲームや映画の世界なので現実にはあり得ないと思ってます。。😣
Feb. 28, 2020
あのう、このリンクの動画を見てくれませんでしたかー
https://youtu.be/mS_JTU1HNw4
信じるか信じないかはあなた次第です ww
Feb. 29, 2020
動画、見ました! いや〜こじつけ過ぎでしょ😆 corona →racoonって…いやいやいや 。傘のマークって…いやいやいや。船の型が一緒じゃーん!って、いやいやいや、まずいでしょ😂
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I can’t get any mask wherever I go. I c I You needed a better transition. In the next sentence you write "then" which implies that you have been searching for a period of time. "Haven't" adds this context. 次の文では、「then」と書きます。これは、一定期間検索していることを表ます。 「Haven't」はこの文脈を明らかにします。 |
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Then, a friend who is good at sewing suggested that she would make me a mask. Then, a friend who is good at sewing suggested that she would make me Then, a friend who is good at sewing suggested that she 「Would」が決めっているイメージと気がします. だが 「suggested」 は曖昧から 「Could」 の方がいいと思います。「Could」は可能性とか提案を表ますね。 |
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I recognized it's true that “Friends are necessary for life” as people say.🥺✨ I asked her to make 5 masks. I re I |
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I thought I would buy her a nice cake and drink set in return for it. I thought I would buy her a nice cake and drink set in return I thought maybe I would buy her a nice cake |
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Last night she messaged me that they were completed, so I met her today to get them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Last night she messaged me to say that they were completed, so I met her today to get them. |
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She said, “It's 500 yen for one mask.” Then, I paid 2,500 yen to her. She said, “It's 500 yen for one mask.” She said, “It's 500 yen Signal your surprise more for the transition. |
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I thought again and found out that money is more necessary for life than friendship.😆 I thought again and found out that money is more necessary for life than friendship.😆 Or if you want a direct translation of your native text, you could use "Money is everything in this world."
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