Dec. 2, 2024
It's hard to have friends when you're an adult, especially as someone who don't like to go to parties and don't like to drink, which is the case for me. I only have three friends from my childhood that are still my close friends, and that's enough to me. One of them is always busy and can't hang out frequently. The other two rather be going out to drink, and I don't like being at places where people are commonly wasted because I start feeling out of place.
The friends we make are generally chosen by the places we attend. As an introvert, I live in an ironic paradox; I'll never meet introverts that could potentially bond with me because they are at their homes. The only solution are the internet, even though it's very different from real life. I'm sorry if this text sound confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to put your thoughts into words, even in our native languages.
It's hard to have friends when you're an adult, especially asif you're someone who doesn't like to go to parties and doesn't like to drink, which is the case for me.
I like the double repetition of "doesn't... doesn't...". I feel that it makes the sentence sound more serious.
I only have three friends from my childhood thatwho are still my close friends, and that's enough to me.
The other two rathprefer beto going out to drink, and I don't like being at places where people are commonly wasted, because I start feeling out of place.
As an introvert, I live in an ironic paradox; I'll never meet introverts thatwho could potentially bond with me because they are at theirll at homes.
The only solution areis the internet, even though it's very different from real life.
I'm sorry if this text sound confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to put your thoughts into words, even in our native languages.
"Native languages" is fine, but i would probably have said "native language" in the singular.
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It's hard to have friends when you're an adult, especially as someone who doesn't like to go to parties and don't like to drink, which is the case for me.
I only have three friends from my childhood that are still my close friends, and that's enough to me.
One of them is always busy and often can't hang out frequently.
The other two would rather be goingo out to drinking, and I don't like being at places where people are commonly wastedwasted all the time because I start feeling out of place.
"Commonly" isn't incorrect, but it sounds out of place because it's a bit more formal sounding word and "wasted" is a very casual word.
As an introvert, I live in an ironic paradox;: I'll never meet introverts thatwho could potentially bond with me because they a're at theirlways at homes.
I think saying "ironic" and "paradox" in the same sentence sounds kind of weird. I would do one or the other. So an alternate would be:
"It's kind of ironic/Its actually ironic: I never meet introverts who could potentially bond with me because they're always at home."
The only solution areis the iInternet, even though it's very different from real life.
Technically, "Internet" is a proper noun in this case, so it should be capitalized according to textbooks. But this rule is pretty lax, so you'll often see it uncapitalized even in newspapers, etc.
I'm sorry if this text sounds confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to putting your thoughts into words, even in your native languages.
Use "your" twice or "our" twice, but don't mix them.
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Very nice, your English is great. =)
Friends
It's hard to have friends when you're an adult, especially as someone who doesn't like to go to parties and don't like to drink, which is the case for meor drink.
I only have three friends from my childhood that are still my close friendsI'm close with, and that's enough to me.
One of them is always busy and can't hang out frequently.
The other two rather be going out to drink, and I don't like being at places where people are commonusually wasted because I start feeling out of place.
The friends we make are generally chosen by the places we attend.
As an introvert, I live in an ironic paradox; I'll never meet introverts that could potentially bond with me because they are at their homes.
The only solution areis the internet, even though it's very different from real life.
I'm sorry if this text sounds confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to put your thoughts into words, even in our native languages.
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Beleza! Eu concordo, I have friends from university but I feel like I will have to make more effort to stay friends with them when we graduate soon, or our connections will falter :/
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As an introvert, I live in an ironic paradox; I'll never meet introverts that could potentially bond with me because they are at their homes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! As an introvert, I live in a I think saying "ironic" and "paradox" in the same sentence sounds kind of weird. I would do one or the other. So an alternate would be: "It's kind of ironic/Its actually ironic: I never meet introverts who could potentially bond with me because they're always at home." As an introvert, I live in an ironic paradox; I'll never meet introverts |
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I'm sorry if this text sound confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to put your thoughts into words, even in our native languages. I'm sorry if this text sounds confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to put your thoughts into words, even in our native languages. I'm sorry if this text sounds confusing; sometimes Use "your" twice or "our" twice, but don't mix them. I'm sorry if this text sound confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to put your thoughts into words, even in our native languages. "Native languages" is fine, but i would probably have said "native language" in the singular. |
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