From where I stand, themy point of view, your family can affects your entire life.

Besides, tThey play a vital role in your life.

"Besides" is very casual and is used to elaborate a point.

It means they are part of your life.

I would remove this sentence. It's grammatically correct, but it's duplicative.

Moreover, wWe have spent thousand dayyears in each other arms.

Additionally, good friends offer valuable suggestionshelpful advice when we feel lost.

ConsequentNaturally, they have a huge impact on the course of your life.

From my perspective, friends can be effectivealso impact your lifestyle and attitude towards life.

There is a key sentencpoignant quote from the famous psychologist who said: phelp your chasildren make good friends for your children.

It shows they play a critical role, the same as family.

Any problemsWhen you find it difficult to talk to parents, you be able to about your problems, you can share with them.

Besides, they accompany ourus over our entire lives.

It proves how they are important and effectivshows us how important and impactful they are.

Besides,For example, by being colleagues, classmates, and roommates, making new friendships withor by meeting your friend's friends.

It means making new friends through other friends.

Correct, but duplicative.

I’m much experienced in this wayThis is often how I've made friends.

it’s mostly aIt's shortcut one to finding new friends because often you areyou usually already sharinge the same ideavalues.

If ithat doesn’'t answerwork, you can try online.

For introverted people it’s the best, however, nowadays trusting new people you don’t know is a little bit tough.

I’m not judging but nonetheless this world is thebut there are a lot of fakes oneut in the world.

As you grow older, friendship becaomes based on mutual benefit.

Children's friendship is pure, breaking easily and makeup againFriendship amongst children is pure, starting and ending freely.

They didn’t look up any properties in humanare not judging and nor evaluating potential friends by their merits or accomplishments.

Adults prefer those who have the same ideaology, jobs, and goals in life.

for theLike, for example, having the same music taste or same movie Genretaste in music or movies.

Nonetheless, I look up to humans for friendship with people who have the same (hating point).

Hating point? Not sure what you mean.

The way I thinkIn my opinion, the most important values for making friendship are honesty and loyalty.

However, I don’t like flatter onespeople.

Besides, a judgemental person is an unmotivated persone.

Despite givshowing a lot of motivationenthusiasm(?), they act as a mirror and show defects.

"Defects" is usually a word used for things like cars or electronics.

Moreover, shareThey will be there in both happiness and sorrow.

From where I stand, the family can affect your life.

Moreover, we have spent thousands of days in each other arms.

or “a thousand days”.

Consequently, they have a huge impact on the course of lifeour lives.

From my perspective, friends can behave an effective on your lifestyle and attitude to life.

There is a key sentence from the famous psychologist who said: purchase good friends for your children.

I’m not familiar with the original quote, but is “purchase” what you mean to say here? “Provide” might work better, because it doesn’t imply you’re buying people.

Any problems you find it difficult to talk to parents about, you bare able to share with them.

Besides, they accompany us throughout our lives.

You accompany a person, not a life.

Besides, being colleagues, classmates, and roommates, makingyou can also make new friendships with your friend's friends.

You need a little phrase follow on from the “besides”.

I’m much experienced in this way.

iIt’s mostly a shortcut one to finding new friends because you often you are sharinge the same ideas.

“Sharing” would mean talking about, whereas “share” just means you have the same ideas whether you talk about them or not, which I think is what you mean here.

If ithat doesn’t answerhelp, you can try online.

Or maybe “if that isn’t the answer” or “if that doesn’t get any results”.

For introverted people it’s best [to do something], however, since nowadays trusting new people you don’t know is a little bit tough.

This sentence seems to be missing some information. What is it best for introverted people to do? Or do you mean it’s best for them to look for friends online? The ”however” makes it seems like introverted people shouldn’t look online.

As you grow older, friendships becaome based on benefit.

Children's friendship is pure, breaking easily and makeing up again.

They didn’t look up any properties in humans.

Not sure what you’re trying to say with this one.

Adults prefer those who have the same ideas, job, and goals in life.

fFor the example having the same music taste or same movie Genrliking the same genre of movie.

Nonetheless, I look up to humans for friendship who have the same hating point.

I don’t understand this either, sorry!

The way I think, the most important values for makingin a friendship are honesty and loyalty.

Besides, a judgemental person is an unmotivated one.

Moreover, sharethey share in our happiness and sorrow.