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Friday Again

It's Friday again. I am so excited, because I will get together with my family soon. I’ll take a roughly 3-hour drive across the city this afternoon. Then I will have hot pot, drink wine, and do some outdoor activities with my family. These are the absolutely best things in the world for me. But come to think of it, maybe I don't have loftier desires anymore, LOL. It's a little bit sad.

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I am so'm excited, because I will get togetherbe with my family soon.

If you have no context, its best to use a simple sentence :)

I’ll take adrive roughly 3- hour drives across the city this afternoon.

You "taking" a drive, would be taking like an uber or someone else driving you. If you are driving, then you use active voice.

Then I will have hot pot, drink wine, and do some outdoor activities with my family.

These are the absolutely the best things in the world forto me.

These are the best things to you, not the best things for you. ( like water, or good health or things for your well being are the best way to you ) Not techincally wrong, but it is a small way to sound more natural.

But come to think of it, maybe I don't have loftier desires anymore, LOL.

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I love it!! But I wonder why you'd say it's sad; sounds like a content life which is the goal for many.

Friday Again

It's Friday again.

I am so excited, because I will get together with my family soon.

I’ll take a roughly 3-hour drivedrive for around three hours across the city this afternoon.

Then I will have hot pot, drink wine, and do some outdoor activities with my family.

These are the absolutely best things in the world for me.

But cCome to think of it, I maybe I don' not have loftiery desires anymore,. LOL.!

It's a little bit sad.

Friday Again

It's Friday again.

I am so excited, because I will get together with my family soon.

OK, but it reads more natural as "I'm so excited, because I'll be getting together with my family soon."

I’ll take a roughly 3-hour drive across the city this afternoon.

Then I will have hot pot, drink wine, and do some outdoor activities with my family.

These are the absolutely the best things in the world for me.

Or: "These are the absolute best things in the world to me."

But come to think of it, maybe I don't have loftier desires anymore, LOL.

It's a little bit sad.

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I hope it's a fun time!

Friday Again


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It's Friday again.


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I am so excited, because I will get together with my family soon.


I am so excited, because I will get together with my family soon.

OK, but it reads more natural as "I'm so excited, because I'll be getting together with my family soon."

I am so excited, because I will get together with my family soon.

I am so'm excited, because I will get togetherbe with my family soon.

If you have no context, its best to use a simple sentence :)

I’ll take a roughly 3-hour drive across the city this afternoon.


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I’ll take a roughly 3-hour drivedrive for around three hours across the city this afternoon.

I’ll take adrive roughly 3- hour drives across the city this afternoon.

You "taking" a drive, would be taking like an uber or someone else driving you. If you are driving, then you use active voice.

Then I will have hot pot, drink wine, and do some outdoor activities with my family.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

These are the absolutely best things in the world for me.


These are the absolutely the best things in the world for me.

Or: "These are the absolute best things in the world to me."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

These are the absolutely the best things in the world forto me.

These are the best things to you, not the best things for you. ( like water, or good health or things for your well being are the best way to you ) Not techincally wrong, but it is a small way to sound more natural.

But come to think of it, maybe I don't have loftier desires anymore, LOL.


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But cCome to think of it, I maybe I don' not have loftiery desires anymore,. LOL.!

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It's a little bit sad.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's a little bit sad.

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