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Finally it's Friday, I could get together with my family this night, it's the happiest thing in the world ^_^. To arrive home earlier, I arrived office one hour earlier than normal because my clock in time must be at least nine hours. I prepared a bottle of red wine to celebrate weekend, waiting for it!
Finally, it's Friday,. I could get together with my family this onight, it's the happiestmost joyful thing in the world ^_^.
Finally, it's Friday > if you don't want a short stop there you can also say It's finally friday!
Although not necessarily incorrect, happy is not usually used to describe inanimate things, you can also say "I'm the happiest in the world!". I corrected it this way but its not ideal either, a form that implies that this is a happy or joyous thing is uncommon and something you likely literally translated from another language
To arrive home earlier, I arrived to the office one hour earlier than normal because my clock in time must be at least nine hours.
Not grammatical, but for the sake of learning vocabulary id rather not repeat "arrive" but say something more in spirit of the language, like "I came into the office earlier"
Another common fitting word for normal here is usual.
I prepared a bottle of red wine to celebrate the weekend, waiting for can't wait!
waiting for is probably a form you directly translated from another language, the English phrase "i can't wait" implies what you probably meant. Sorry if you meant literally that you are waiting for it haha.
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Your spelling is perfect, but you need to work on articles > "a/an" and "the", as well as phrases, because English is really rich in phrases and if you want to fully master it and understand conversation you need to know your phrases. I am also not a native English speaker and I recommend you to learn these phrases mostly by passive means (reading and watching content in English) and it will come naturally, even though you have them in textbooks as well.
You know individual words but you should work on how you put them in constructions and context to express what you really mean. Good luck!
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Finally it's Friday,. I couldan get together with my family this onight, it's the happiest thing in the world! It makes me so happy ^_^.
To arrive home earlier, I arrived at the office one hour earlier than normal because my clock in timeI must bework at least nine hours.
I prepared a bottle of red wine to celebrate this weekend,. I can't waiting for it!
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Yay! It's the weekend! I fixed some wording to make things sound more natural. Enjoy your weekend!
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the clock in time bugged me too, but i believe its a fair expression if you want to emphasize that you need to be clocked in for that amount of time, not necessarily be at work.
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Finally it's Friday, I could get together with my family this onight, it's the happiest thing in the world ^_^.
To arrive home earlier, I arrived at the office one hour earlier than normal because my clock in time must be at least nine hours.
I prepared a bottle of red wine to celebrate the weekend, waiting. I'm excited for it!
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Woohoo! It's not quite Friday here yet, but I'm also excited for the weekend!
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